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(❗TW: Character death, Blood❗)
#9 - Over
The stars don't care about us.
[Villain] smiled deliriously, bloody teeth blazing up at the dark sky. The silverish lights glinted down without any judgement or interest.
They've witnessed so many crimes, so many tragedies. And still, they don't care.
[Villain] would die here. Two shots were enough to end their useless life underneath the clear firmament. Well. Every action had its' consequences, right?
"[Hero]...? Are you there...?", [Villain] wispered and stretched out their hand. Broken fingers brushed over the ones of their enemy, hesistantly asking them to return the touch. [Villain] felt how alien blood bedewed their fingertips.
[Hero] was bleeding out too. [Supervillain] had been cruel enough to make sure their life was ending right next to [Villains]. They didn't even know something.
They shouldn't have helped. Why had [Hero] helped? This had been [Villains] business, not theirs.
"Answer me... Please.", they huffed and lightly squeezed the other ones' hand. "Are you there?"
Only cold light.
"I am here, [Villain]." [Hero] answered and gently took the other ones injured hand into their own shaking fingers. "I am here."
Miles, miles and miles away.
They were breathing together, slowly and stertorously. It was over soon. They were laying on the hard concrete and waited for the minutes to pass.
Waited for the inevitable.
And the stars shine ever so brightly.
"I don't want to die, [Hero]."
"Me neither."
A single tear rolled over [Villains] cheek. They weren't sure, if [Hero] was crying too. "Thank you for being here. For... Helping me...", they mumbled and closed their eyes when the darkness started to surround them entirely. They pressed [Heros] fingers one last time. "Thank you... I-I never wanted to die... alone.."
[Hero] smiled weakly before closing their own eyes.
"...It's been a honour, [Villain]."
I made this… surprisingly. Haven’t drawn in like a year, kind of shows. I don’t hate it but I can definitely do better. Anyways, this is my whump art. Anyone’s free to use it if they’d like to, it’s simplistic and easy to tamper with. Tag me if you do use this.
Date: 29 March, 2023
I forgot to wish everyone a happy whump day yesterday (September 12th), so here’s an extra special thank you to everyone in the community for making this genre such a wonderful experience for all of our whumpers, whumpees, caretakers and those in between.
I wish you a supercalifragilisticexpialidocious rest of your whump year. Happy whumping!
- 🪻
I’m not a perfectionist, but finding a typo or a grammatical error in my own already-published fic is like stepping on a Lego honestly
reblog if you believe fanfic writers are as valid and talented as any professional writer who publishes and sells their novels
I’m trying to prove a point
Introduction post
hello!
my name is A! i’m 20 and i’ve been lurking in the shadows of this wonderful community for 2 years. i’ve finally gathered the confidence to make an own account and write some stuff! i stumbled upon whump when i was 18 and since i’ve loved it. i hope my writing will be a fine addition to the absolute amazing works i’ve seen on here!
this has a special place in my heart:
• manhandling/beating
yes, please, beat them. show me some bruises. sadistic whumpers *chefs kiss
• captivity/restrains/bound
• choking/strangulation
• fainting/unconsciousness
• anticipation
yes. yes. yes! this pain will come. and there isn’t anything you can do to stop it. im a sucker for power dynamics.
nsfw is ok, gore/amputation isn’t really doing it for me. i’m here to have a fun time and escape my life beating me into the ground. if i don’t come online for some time, i’m not dead, just really busy.
~ make them suffer
listen, y’all don’t appreciate
hanging from your wrists
(without touching the ground)
enough.
cw: unwilling suspension, choking, loss of consciousness, begging, beating, broken bones
• Hanging by the wrists puts pressure on the chest muscles. The consequence of this is difficulty breathing, difficulty talking, because the lungs are compressed. The diaphragm that causes in-and exhalation would get exhausted so it’s more and more exhausting to breathe until… whumpee doesn’t have the strength anymore and passes out. It’s like slow choking and there’s nothing whumpee can do than to beg to be let down
• Blood circulation to the hands is cut off because 1) too tightly bound wrists that need to hold the whumpees weight and 2) arms above body in the air, so the arms would get numb after initial pain and sore and turn a pale color. After the suspension the wrists and arms could be swollen and hurting to the touch/bruised
• Straining the shoulder muscles, tearing the shoulder muscles, dislocating the shoulders, all very painful
• Hang your whumpee up and wait until they pass out, let them down until they regain consciousness, hang them up again, and so on and so forth. The realization and following panic after waking up that it’s not over after one time, that whumper will let them slowly choke and suffer again, and again, and again, the helplessness
small addition: whumpee won’t be able to move after this because the muscles (of the upper body half at least) are all strained and sore.
• Get a baseball bat or a cane or smth and spice things up a bit, everyone needs a stress relieve after all, the bruises, the broken bones, whumpee kicking and trashing, the struggling because whumpee doesn’t have enough air to scream
Anyways, lots of potential, you can do anything with this, love to see it. it’s like pizza, when it’s there, it’s good no matter the shape or form. 8.5/10
It’s time for an ask session again
Can ask both about SI and Inconstore, also can ask stuff that’s not in the list too
Whump Ask Game
Pass it on!
What kind of whump is your favorite to write?
What kind of whump is your least favorite to write (although you still do write it)?
What kind of whump do you absolutely refuse to write?
Is there a kind of whump you wish you could write better?
What character or characters are your favorite to do whumpy things to in your writing?
What character or characters are your favorite to turn into caretakers in your writing?
Have you ever written whump inspired by personal experiences?
How many whumpy stories do you currently have published online?
Which of your stories has the most whump in it?
What is your favorite whumpy story you have written?
Share one of your favorite whumpy scenes that you have written.
What is one of the strangest things you have had to research for your whumpy writing?
What is the most recent thing you have researched for use in your whumpy writing?
Has any of your whump research ever come in handy in real life?
Are you ever hampered by your lack of medical knowledge when writing whump?
Has anyone ever called you out on an incorrectly written medical or whumpy scene (such as telling you that the character would have bled out long before help arrived)?
Do you consider character death (that is not reversed) to be whump?
Do ever rely on magical cures or deus ex machina to resolve whumpy situations?
How long have you been writing whump?
What was the first fandom you wrote whump for?
What fandom would you like to write whump for, but haven't done so yet (due to not knowing it well enough, etc.)?
Do you have any particular songs or playlists that help you get in the mood to write whump?
Do you write whump for OCs or just canon characters?
Do you have any whump pet peeves? Meaning things that just bug you when you see them in a fanfic.
What advice or wisdom would you like to share with other whump writers?
Hold your horse my dude, who pissed you off this time
"Alexi? No, A-0717, the last leftover human weapon from previous civilization. You are under arrest under third king anti human weaponization decree
Drop all your catalyst on the ground and do not resist"