Story Idea

Story Idea

okay, I had this idea and want people’s opinions. Would you read a story about two girlfriends, and then one of them dies in a car crash towards the start of the story. The other girlfriend (who was also in the car but survived) feels guilty about surviving, and the rest of the story shows her going through the stages of grief, but instead of acceptance, it all becomes to much for her to handle and in the end unalives herself to be reunited with her gf. Please let me hear your thoughts, idk if it’s worth it to work on the story or not.

Could I ask for tips on how to write kisses?

Writing The Perfect Kiss Scene

#1 Find the RIGHT moment

We all know what I mean! The "zing" when the character's faces are get close enough must come unexpected (but) when both of them are looking for romance/comfort.

For example:

Tripping over each other in the hallway

Person A covering their face with their hands and Person B prying them off, their eyes meeting...

Sitting next to each other in the library, elbows touching, and they happen to turn around to face each other...

Find a natural way to bring your characters the romantic atmosphere!

#2 Noticing the Other Person

It's natural to to see someone in a different way when there's romantic vibe pulsating in the air. Maybe your character notices that their crush has a speck of green in their eyes they didn't notice before.

#3 Build Ups

Describe how the characters feel moments before their lips touch. This includes things like racing hearts, sweaty palms, unsteady breathing. etc.

#4 Feeling all Self-Conscious

If you're writing a first-person POV or want to portray the nervous excitement of kissing a love interest for the first time, you can afford to have your character be distracted by how they feel inside, or worrying about how they smell/look, etc.

Maybe they feel like it's too early in the relationship to kiss

They're still thinking about that annoying math problem

Did I apply my new cherry-flavored chapstick? etc.

This should come in the same beat as the "notice the other person", heightening the romance tension between the characters.

Once they get closer and the kiss actually happens, these worries will melt away!

#4 Describing the Details

In most cases, it's best to keep things understated (especially in regards to tongues)

tongues cannot "tangle" or "battle" or "swish around"...please, no.

Focus on the lips and how the characters move (like hugging, pushing the other against a wall, breathing, etc.), adding the tongue as an afterthought.

Don't get too exicted about taste.

No, her tongue didn't taste like fresh roses and peaches, unless she was eating peach candy right before the kiss.

Focus on other sensations other than taste: especially touch, heat. the tickle of his breath on her cheekc, etc. Or even the smell of shampoo.

#5 The Pullaway + Reaction

Does the kiss end naturally, or does something else interrupt them?

How do the characters react: do they blush, say something, hug he other person, or run away with a deep blush? For couples, they can even tease the other.

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Spoilers for “They Both Die At The End”

Who gave Adam Silvera permission to end the book this way and break my heart??? How dare he show us Rufus after Mateo’s death and then end it like this????

Master List of Superpowers

power themes: light, dark, earth, water, electricity, air, life, psychic, energy, fire +

Light ✨

Dark light manipulation: create the darkes light in existence

White light manipulation: create sacred light

Photokinesis

Force-field generation: create rpotective shield of solid photons

Invisibiity: be unseen

Laser emission: bend light wavelengths to create lasers

Light absorbtion: absorb the light around you

Light generation: emit blinding light or glow in the dark

Light mimicry: take on the traits of light

Photoportation: teleport by using photons

Projectie insibility: turn other things invisible

Evil banish: rid and banish all spirits of evil and black magic

Dark 🖤

Umbrakinesis - can manipulate and control darkness or shadows.

Animated Shadow - Animate one's shadow.

Light Absorption - block out light in an area

Night Vision - see in the dark.

Sacred Darkness - create holy darkness.

Shadow Mimicry - become a shadow.

Umbraportation - teleport via the shadows and darkness.

Water 💧

Hydrokinesis - manipulate and control liquid water and mold it into any desired shape or form

Aquatic Respiration - breathe underwater.

Atmokinesis - control and manipulate the various aspects of the weather by mixing water, ice, fire, earth, air, and lightning/electricity.

Dehydration - absorb water.

Hydroportation - teleport across short or long distances through liquid water.

Water Mimicry - turn into liquid water.

Water Generation - generate water.

Holy Water Manipulation - create, manipulate and control graceful waters.

Dark Water Manipulation - create, manipulate and control evil and dangerous waters.

Electricity ⚡

Quintessence Force - generates whitish-blue lightning that also contains pure life energy.

Electrokinesis - control, generate or absorb electric fields and shoot lightning bolts.

Activation & Deactivation - turn stuff on and off.

Positron Manipulation - control positrons, the antimatter counterpart to electrons.

Electrical Absorption: absorb electric energy

Electric Mimicry - transform entire body into a lightning-like being of pure electrical energy.

Electroportation - teleport with lightning/electricity

Divine Lightning Manipulation - create and control the brightest lightning.

Black Lightning Manipulation - create and control the darkest lightning.

Air 💨

Air Embodiment - Become the embodiment/personification of the element of air.

Aeroscience - Have absolute knowledge about air.

Aerokinetic Combat - Combine air-related abilities with combat.

Aerokinetic Constructs -Create/Construct anything using air.

Aerokinetic Regeneration - Heal/Regenerate using air.

Aero-Telekinesis - Use telekinesis using air

Aeromancy - Gain divination via air

Air Mimicry - transform into a cloud of gas, fog, or mist.

Atmokinesis - manipulate the weather by mixing water, ice, fire, earth, air, and lightning/electricity.

Deoxygenation - suck up all the oxygen from a place.

Lung Adaptation - breathe anywhere.

Wind Generation - create blasts of wind.

Air Generation - create or generate blasts of air.

Pure Wind/Air Manipulation - create and control pure winds.

Dark Wind/Air Manipulation - create and control corrupted winds.

Levitation - the ability to make anything rise up in the air and move around under your control.

Life 🌱

Enhanced healing

Necromancy

Telepathy

Being able to mutate others

Change blood types at will

Blood Cloning: To create clones of themselves by using blood.

Blood Mimicry: To mimic the properties of blood. Blood Pressure: To manipulate the pressure and flow of blood inside bodies.

Blood Propulsion: To propel one's self using blood.

Blood Teleportation: To teleport through blood.

Blood Transformation: To transform matter into blood.

Haemokinetic Combat: To infuse blood in physical combat.

Haemopotent Regeneration: To regenerate oneself using blood.

Haemopotent Replication: To replicate powers with blood as a medium.

Thermovariance: To boil targets blood.

Fire 🔥

Holy Fire Manipulation - Generate and control flames of Heaven.

Inflammation - burn things.

Melting - heat molecules to melt things without touching or using fire

Plasmakinesis - control plasma.

Pyromancy- Divination via fire.

Pyrotechnics - create fireworks.

Self-Detonation - explode self and reform.

Stellar Manipulation - manipulate and control stars.

Thermokinesis - create, control and manipulate heat.

Pyroportation - teleport or move though fire.

Stellar Manipulation - manipulate and control stars.

Psychic 🌟

Astral Projection: the ability to have out of body experiences and separate the astral body from the physical body at will.

Aura Reading: the ability to perceive the energy surrounding a living being.

Auto-Writing: Writing without conscious thought. An act performed often by mediums.

Bilocation: Being in many places at once.

Channeling: Communicating with a spirit.

Clairalience: Having a smell perception outside the human senses.

Clairaudience: Having an auditory perception outside the human senses.

Claircognizence: Having a thought perception outside the human senses.

Clairgustance: Having a taste perception outside the human senses.

Clairsentience: Having a physical perception outside the human senses. Related to psychometry.

Clairvoyance: Having a visual perception outside the human senses.

Divination: Gaining insight into a situation by use of tools or ritual.

Dowsing: Ability to locate an object.

Energy Healing: The ability to mend physical, emotional, energetie and mental wounds with energy.

Levitation: Flying or floating.

Earth ⛰︎

Geokinesis - control, manipulate, create, generate and reshape or shape earth/rocks/stones

Earth Mimicry - have a body made up of earth or earthen substance

Atmokinesis - control and manipulate the weather by mixing water, ice, fire, earth, air, and lightning/electricity.

Crystallokinesis - manipulate minerals and crystals.

Ferrokinesis - manipulate metal at will.

Fraxikinesis - manipulate burnt matter.

Geo-Thermokinesis - manipulate, control, and create lava, magma and volcanoes.

Golem Creation - make golems out of inanimate materials like rocks, wood, plants, magma, etc.

Granulation - can turn things into sand.

Halokinesis - control and manipulate salt.

Hyalokinesis - control and manipulate glass.

Koniokinesis - manipulate and control dust particles.

Plassikinesis - manipulate and control all forms ofplastic.

Psammokinesis - can control and manipulate sand.

Terrakinesis - control, manipulate and alter/reshape the surrounding terrain and landscape at will.

Terraportation - teleport via the earth and earth- based materials.

Pure Earth Manipulation - Create, manipulate and control pure and good earth minerals.

Black Earth Manipulation - Create, manipulate and control corrupted and evil earth minerals.

Ice 🧊

Atmokinesis - control and manipulate the weather by mixing water, ice, fire, earth, air, and lightning/electricity.

Cryokinesis - control ice, snow and other forms of frozen water.

Freeze Breath - freeze things in solid ice.

Freezing - lower the temperature in kinetic atoms to freezing temperatures.

Frigokinesis - control snow either as precipitation or already on the ground.

Energy 💥

Dynamokinesis - manipulate existing energy.

Energy Blast - create blasts of energy.

Energy Emission - release energy.

Quintessence Force - create and manipulate unique form of electrical and life energy.

Mana Manipulation - manipulate magical energies.

Chi Manipulation - manipulate metaphysical life energies.

Omnikinesis - manipulate absolutely any form of energy and matter.

Gyrokinesis - manipulate gravity.

Sonokinesis - manipulate sound.

Maanetokinesis - manipulate magneuc energy.

Other

Aether Manipulation - manipulate the fifth, holiest element.

Cosmic Manipulation - manipulate the aspects of space.

Gravity Manipulation - manipulate gravity and gravitational forces.

Nether Manipulation - manipulate the final, unholiest element.

Space-Time Manipulation - manipulate either space or the concept of time.

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