Park Jimin Was Going To Die Violently And There Was Nothing He Could Do About It.

Park Jimin was going to die violently and there was nothing he could do about it. 

So after fatefully crying, and then fist-pumping, to BE, I'm back. 

To be completely honest, I loved this part so, so, much. I loved the fact that we had a moment of sassy Jimin standing his ground to Namjoon and biting back (no pun intended). But Jimin has a point. I mean, I wouldn’t want someone to be like “I plan on killing you because I don’t think you’re the most worthy, but no hard feelings, right?” like wtf?!?!! I also wonder why Jimin chose to fight in human form out of the others. Maybe it was to show that he could be strong without the extra capabilities? Maybe it was to be more authentic? I’m not sure, but when I read that I was surprised, but I also found myself feeling a bit proud and understanding even though if this goes bad, the scene would be quite tragic and devastating, and just down-right brutal.

On that note too, Namjoon made my blood start to simmer with his snide comments. He sounds like a complete asshole. An overly confident and smart one who needs to be taken down a few pegs, but still an ass. 

I love it. 

But I actually softened up on him during the scene with Yunli because you know that there’s something deeper there in their connection. There was just something in that moment that felt so soul-bonding and unique with them even though I barely know anything about them yet. I'm really interested to see how their story goes later on because it's very pulling and I love this trope.

Another part that I enjoyed was this one:

A strange, desperate frustration overtook you.

He was too far away - and Namjoon was going to take him from you before you could touch him again - before you could breathe him in again-

The cruel wind continued to pull your fragrance toward Jimin like an erotic incense, yet it offered you no such gift in return. You could not discern his scent and you wanted to - needed to - with a voracity that was almost blinding.

Please…

This was just so well-written and emotional, and you see the connection between the Luna and Jimin start to come to fruition in a more prominent way. I mean, Jimin knew what she needed and sent her the braided cloth to help ease her. And it's even more telling when paired with when the Luna said before that she would do anything to save him. Like wow. Wow, okay. So we're really doing this today. 

I can't wait to learn more about Jin and his omega-ness because the part where he released his pheromones was really cool. And I wonder what's going on with the table too…

Anyways, I think that I'm done rambling, but if you've been reading my comments so far, then thank you. Sorry that this is long. But I cant wait to sink my teeth into the next parts (pun intended). Thank you so much Vi! I'm sending you my love💕💕💕

The Terms

◐ PART III of THE ALPHA ◐

◐ Part I ◐ Part II ◐ Series Masterlist ◐

Pairing: Alpha Werewolf Jimin x Omega Reader

Rating: Mature (for this installment)

Warnings: ABO sexual dynamics including discussion of scenting, marking, mating, and claiming. Violence and discussion of violence relating to ritual combat. Jin’s pheromones need their own warning. Yoonji and Yunli are not the same person.

Word Count: 2300

Author’s Note: As promised, this chapter is twice as long as the previous two and a lot of what people have been speculating about in the asks is discussed in this chapter… along with a few surprises…

“Luna rex provocatione means ‘the moon king’s challenge.’ It is never invoked lightly as its consequences are grave indeed… If an alpha believes that he is the true Alpha and the goddess has placed another in his path as a test of worthiness and dedication to the pack, then he will acknowledge his acceptance of this test by declaring luna rex provocatione. Once the challenge has been set forth only the death of the Luna’s first mate or the total surrender of the challenger can satisfy it…”

Text of the traditional speech given by a chief elder to begin a luna rex provocatione ritual [7th century]

“I know you won’t understand, but this isn’t personal-”

Jimin offered his rival an overtly feigned smile.

“You plan to kill me and claim my mate. Which part of that could I possibly take personally?”

Tae snorted somewhere in the background and Yoongi elbowed him hard.

Tradition dictated that both alphas meet with their second-in-commands in the chief elder’s chambers to discuss the terms of combat.

Namjoon brought Min Yoongi and Jimin had somehow ended up with Taehyung.

He didn’t remember actually agreeing to make Tae his second…

It just sort of happened somewhere between calming his hysterical mother and quickly reading up on archaic pack law.

The chief elder coughed uncomfortably. Goddess, this ascension was supposed to be easy. He never in a million moons thought he’d be in this position.

The last chief elder who oversaw a luna rex provocatione ritual had immortalized it in his journal as “the single most horrific moment of my life,” describing in detail the Luna howling in torment at the loss of her mate and the victor collapsing over the corpse of his foe in misery and guilt.

As in the past, the outcome of this conflict was already decided by fate…

Pain and regret weighed heavily on the older man as he considered the younger of the two alphas.

Park Jimin was going to die violently and there was nothing he could do about it.

“Because Kim Namjoon issued the challenge, his opponent will decide combat form. Your choices are human form, half-shifted, and wolf-form. After your choice is declared, Namjoon may add a minor alteration if he so desires. Park Jimin, please declare form.”

“Human,” he answered softly - and every single occupant of the room recoiled in response.

It was bad enough to witness a fight in wolf form or half-shifted… but to engage in ritual combat as a human-

It would be brutal - even psychologically disturbing - without the benefit of a wolf’s hide to mask the savagery.

Namjoon’s eyes widened in shock, but he recovered quickly.

“I request teeth and claws.”

Not quite a half-shift. Teeth and claws allowed for attacks using lengthened canines and claws.

It could make a kill slightly more… humane.

Jimin nodded and the elder pressed his seal over the first of the terms.

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[Not @ me having a dream about reading this chapter before I actually did lmaooo!]

Honestly, you would not believe the chokehold this week has held on me. Like...SHIT! Can a bitch breathe?!?!

Sorry. I’m usually more composed and eloquent whenever I do this, but...damn! You know? 

Anyways…

Hi Shanna. Honestly, there are no words that I could express right now having read this because I feel like everyone else has said the things that I would like to say (yeah, I kinda spoiled myself a little before reading this chapter), but wow. The way this story is continuing to unfold, and so cinematically too, is just leaving me speechless. 

Starting off, I love the small nod to Namjoon during the coffee shop scene. It was light. Witty. A bit strained though and that's why I couldn’t help but wonder if the main character and Finn are actually going to break the glass ceiling back into normality. They’re trying, but it only seems to be scratching at the surface, and there’s only so much that you can do before your arms get tired and you eventually just give up. It’s sad now that I’m actually putting words to this, but I’m very glad that you’re bringing out these emotions in me. 

I also really enjoyed Jungkook’s appearance in this and noticing how Jimin was more tense than usual. To be honest, I laughed when you panned over to stiff Jimin when he was packing up from class. Sabrina though was someone that stood out to me the most during this chapter. It was interesting seeing her in this new light. From seeing her so sure and confident in herself, someone who is so firm and sturdy and poised, to seeing her with cracks in her persona. Seeing her look more “human” and softening around the edges. It made me sit up a little and pay attention to her more because this was so different than how we usually see her, so I’m looking forward to her arc, if she does have one, later. 

When it came to the party, it was a moment that I knew would ruin me (it was also at this scene where I realized that Noelle Monique from Kim Possible. If that's true then Sabrina is totally Bonnie). Anyways, Jimin and Hoseoks Halloween costume?!?!?!? Shanna!! And when Jimin said, "Things happen for reason, right?" OOP- (I’m sorry, my brain kinda gave up on me here and I was in a continuous mindset of what the actual fuc- 

So the party, part two!! My last brain cell came back here, so I was able to think a lot about what you wrote here. One thing that really came about was just the irony that even though she and Finn are close, they couldn't be further apart. It’s saddening. It's like watching an accident about to happen so you kinda just have to brace yourself until the impact and just pray that the aftermath isn’t terribly disastrous. I also was reflecting a lot on the parallels between what happened with her and Finn at the club versus her and Jimin: she didn’t dance with Finn, but she did with Jimin. Alcohol got spilled on her and she was upset, alcohol got spilled on someone else and she laughed. But in both instances, Jimin was there for her in the end. Except for, you know, after THAT. And finally, FINALLY, Sabrina got the talk that she needed to knock her down a peg. Though I'm curious to see what's going on on her side of things and see if she’ll take the main character’s comments and actually take them to heart. No matter how many times I say that I feel a bit aversive to Sabrina, there is still a part of me that feels for her. There’s so much potential underneath...and… and maybe a part of me wants to give her a hug. I don’t know though. She’d probably kick me in the gut while she does a grand plie or something with a smile on her face. Still love her though!

Also, I love Noelle. So, so much. When she got the call from the mc, she didn’t ask any questions and dropped everything was there for her right then and there. And the rest of the ending reminded me of a TikTok where a girl said to let your friends be the standard for your relationships and that was so crystal clear right then and there. 

I don’t know how things will pan out from here, to be honest, I kept trying to come up with theories but now I’m just here for this very enjoyable and emotional ride. Thank you so much Shanna for this. I’ll always be cheering you on. Sending you lots and lots and lots and lots of love!😘💕

Raise the Barre (Ch. 8)

Author: kpopfanfictrash

Pairing: Jimin / Reader

Rating: 18+ (Eventual Smut)

Genre: Enemies to Lovers / Dance Academy!AU

Warnings: underage drinking, angst, hoseok’s bare abs

Word Count: 10,705

Summary: You and Park Jimin have been rivals for as long as you’ve known one another; ever since he tripped you in the front row of your first dance convention. When you graduate from high school and enter Russet Ballet Academy, you tell yourself you’re leaving all past quarrels behind. The main problem with this though, is that your past seems determined not to leave you alone.

Worse still, the obstacles you face while out in the real world might prove more challenging than anything your enemy has to offer.  

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[This was seriously long overdue. Hi Vi!!!!]

Hi Vi,

It’s been a while. I hope that you’ve been doing okay. I know that I’m a bit late to ‘The Alpha’ train, but hopefully, I can jump on board and catch up. I’ve been spoiling myself with all of the asks and a spark of fate (or maybe just procrastination that’s eating me up) finally led me back to you. To this. To this beautiful world that gripped me by my shoulders and sucked me in from the very start. 

It’s truly amazing how much has been packed within this first part. You see the first glimpses of the world surrounding them. You see some of the character dynamics shine through (especially in the way Jimin takes his place beside Namjoon unsurprisingly and with a hint of what could be called resentment that’s mixed in with his pessimistic tone. But you also see from the Luna’s side how she is is going through her own trials too. Growing up and having to mate with someone who she doesn’t have feelings for. Someone that makes her feel “empty” like you said. It struck hard though when you wrote:

“It won’t matter once you scent him. You’ll want him then.”

Your mother’s words echoed reassuringly in your head.

“I’ll want him then,” you whispered as the blindfold tightened around your eyes.

Like, that’s so sad and I really felt for her then. But now that the circumstances are definitely not what was perceived, I honestly so curious to see how this will all play out. Thank you so much Vi for this series. I can’t wait to catch up. Sending you lots of love.💕

Edit: Also, I forgot to add this in, but I really liked this part “The whispers and gasps were deafening. Reverent silence utterly shattered.” It just feels really dark and sharp like ice, and it took my breath away when I read it. Okay, that’s all. Thank you again!😂

The Alpha

◐ SERIES MASTERLIST ◐

Pairing: Alpha Werewolf Jimin x Omega Reader

Author’s Note: This will be a Drabble Series. The next one will probably come out very soon and I will get a masterlist together. I was so excited, I haven’t even made a proper banner yet… Thank you @xjoonchildx​ for listening while I freaked out about this idea. Thank you @ppersonna​ @taetaewonderland​ and @lemonjoonah​ for being your awesome selves at all times…

Genre: ABO/Werewolf • Fantasy

Rating: Mature (some later installments will likely be Explicit)

Warnings: mentions of mating, claiming, and scent marking, ABO/Werewolf sexual dynamics, I think that’s all for this installment…

Word Count: 1000

The whispers and gasps were deafening. Reverent silence utterly shattered.

“This cannot be right-”

“It can’t be him-”

It was supposed to be Namjoon. And in the incredibly off chance that it wasn’t - then it was definitely Jungkook.

Not Jimin.

Never Jimin.

Most people had trouble even believing the youngest Park was an alpha…

Let alone The Alpha.

Everything up to this moment had gone according to plan.

Twenty years ago a new Luna had come into the world; the latest in a line of powerful Omega women.

Silver hair. Silver eyes.

There was no mistaking the new moon princess. You were utterly exquisite from the day you were born.

And the ritual of a Luna’s ascension was intimately familiar after hundreds of years.

Every step planned and expected. Every outcome predicted.

On the midnight of her twentieth birthday, a Luna, the true born moon princess, came of age.

Her wolf would emerge and change her body, heightening her senses for the first time.

And for the first time, she would know the scent of her mate.

The Alpha.

The next king by right - by divine mandate.

And there was no question who it would be.

Kim Namjoon was the strongest, the smartest, the fastest, the largest - the most absurdly obvious alpha in the entire pack.

Everyone knew what would happen. It was so predictable that some people hadn’t even bothered to attend the ceremony.

First, the elders would bring you back to the sacred circle after your change.

You would be blindfolded to ensure that your eyes would not deceive your other senses.

Then, the unmated alphas would line the circle’s perimeter, watching with bated breath as you were guided toward the center by the chief elder.

Finally, you would breathe deeply and approach Kim Namjoon, following the ancient pull of a mating bond that bound you to the one true alpha of your pack.

…But that is not what happened.

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hiiiiiidbnd I just wanna say that every one of my fics you’ve reblogged and complimented me on make me sososoosoo happy and I don’t know why I haven’t responded sooner. YOURE JUST SO SWEET THO and I just wanted to thank you for taking the time out of ur day to write such nice things 😊 also your fic recs have been saving my life lately I’m on your page pretty much 99.9% of the time that I have the tumblr app opened

Okay so first of all, I would like to say that I'm honestly such a fan of yours. I've been reading your stories for years, and you were one of the first blogs that I followed and truly led into the world of fan fic so...hiiiii Bri!!! This is honestly such a pleasure and I'm lowkey freaking out tbh because of this. I'm so happy that I can make you happy because you've been making me happy for eons! But, I mean every single word when I say that you and your writings are truly amazing. They make me nostalgic every time I look back at them and I'm just so grateful for you. And I'm so glad that you've been enjoying my recommendations. It really means alot🥺 You're awesome! I really wish that I had more to say but it'll just be noise. ILY!!! Thank you Bri for everything. Truly.💕

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Isn’t it stupid, that some excessive part of you wants him to openly refute your lies even as you tell them? To undress your mind as hungrily he does your body until you have no choice but to be bared and free, released from the burden of your own thoughts?

To be honest, I’m not really sure how to start of with this. Partially because I’m in the middle of studying for finals, but mainly because this chapter took my breath away. Introduction scenes are a gateway to the remainder of the story, so you could only imagine how I felt watching the scene at the town unfold. To put it simply, I was sad. The main characters feelings of inadequacy and selfishness were understandable, but I wish that she wasn’t so hard on herself. I hope that later on, she gets a chance of helping the mother and her baby, or if not, then have the chance to do something great for others outside the realm she resides in. She has such a beautiful heart and soul, and I just don’t want her to feel down about herself.

Reading how the following events unfolded made my heart simultaneously stop and beat faster than ever. Yoongi put himself in a place of submission for her, stepping down from his place of usual control and instead wanting to pleasure her. Fully and wholly. It was intense coming to this section of the story, but it was all so beautiful and loving (It was a bit funny on my end though reading this and having my best friend swearing in the background at his studies/professor. it’s finals weeks so yeah…)

The last few paragraphs after Yoongi comforts her and creates a place for her to cry were so beautiful. The way you write is so eloquent and purposeful and filled with raw and intense emotion. It’s poetry unearthed, and I’d love to continue reading your work for as long as possible. 

Thank you so much Rain for making my day better. This was a fantastic read and I can’t wait to see what else is in store for them. Thank you!! I’m sending you all of my love.💕

june 1869.

you’ve never been able to hide from him.

pairing: joseon king!yoongi x reader genre: smut, angst, fluff? words: 2.3k contains: choices, consequences.

moonlit throne index. this is drabble 21. start from the beginning?

The moment you reach your private chambers, you collapse against the door. Your heart softly shudders with strain as you finally let the first tears fall, trickling steadily down your cheeks. The bundles you carried in fall to the floor as you cover your face with your cold hands, trying to stifle the quiet sobs that seem so determined to come.

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