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Listen, I haven’t actually seen the Be More Chill Musical... I’ve researched it though, watched a few things online... listened to the soundtrack so many times it should be illegal
and like...
it’s awesome, it’s great...
but I can’t help feeling that maybe... just maybe ... if a certain scene from the book oooon let’s say page 80 had been added in someway.... the musical would be a downright masterpiece.
Just saying.
Also (Spoilers for those who haven’t read the book under link)
I think it needs to be established, especially at this part of the book, that Jeremy and the Squip made the book for Christine to read. And like I understand the boy wanted to be as truthful and stick to the actual plot as possible but... it was very much not necessary to include the fact he was jacking off during that time on page 80.
And like I know Jeremy was going at it before Michael called, but there was no need to continue while on the phone with him. Like the boy can take his hand off his dick for at least that short amount of time, but no.
And then to very specifically state that you’re not whacking it to Michael.
Like Jeremy.
My boi.
My awkward furry friend.
There are so much better ways as coming out as bisexual to your love interests.
So, sooo much better ways.
Somebody actually helpful please help this boi I swear
