And Here Is One I Failed Even More At--six Sentences, Instead Of Three:
And here is one I failed even more at--six sentences, instead of three:
“Here,” Zuko suddenly says, shoving the assignment brief he’s been reading all night in front of Sokka’s face, like Sokka ever wants to look at the thing again. He doesn’t particularly want to dwell on the source of the crumbling ashes of his once-bright future at the moment—his final project that is due tomorrow and was going great up until it suddenly wasn’t.
“A loophole,” Zuko says, triumph on his face, and Sokka thinks he’s suddenly getting a glimpse of just the kind of annoying, pedantic, stubbornly persistent lawyer Zuko is going to be when he graduates, the kind that bases entire arguments around Oxford commas. “They said the student whose marble takes the longest to reach the bottom of their roller coaster without ever stopping wins.” His smile is just a little bit feral. “They never define what a roller coaster is.”
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