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"Comedia est Transcendens"

The Tumblr Blog of Retro Ace, Head of Divine Comedy Productiosn and aspiring storyteller of high-fantasy blended with various genres

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It's Kinda More Than Jus That, The White Fang Is Corrupt, But Its Not That Easy To Spot Due To Its Branches

It's kinda more than jus that, the White Fang is corrupt, but its not that easy to spot due to its branches in the North, West, and East which are doing a pretty good job, West taking more pacifist role because that alone is enough to sway the west,

The North they are taking a more physical route fighting corrupt higher ups and the anti-Faunus militia The Kriegsratten Korps(They allude to the Rats in The Nutcracker plus allusions to Nazis) except the SDC which isn't the bad guys in this one(they're more like a once great relatively big but local company but not doing so well now), that actually goes to Watts and his Conglomerate, Gigawatts Robotics(But I'm gonna ramble right off topic for that)

The South, well Vacou really doesn't have that problem so the WF just oversees its progress

But the main branch in the East reeks of corruption by the demagogue Sumire Kuroko, Blake and Adam's abusive sensei(and Adam's 'surrogate mother') and my Canon!Adam substitute who's using the situations in the other parts of the world to distract the other branches as she plans to corrupt the WF from the inside-out so she can use it for selfish political power and has even more twisted intentions for her pupils to live out her sick fantasy, let's just say she herself was an ex-lover of Blake's late father Ghira when they were young...

Blake and Adam are aware and seek to kick her out, but Adam doesn't want outside help while Blake does, and it strains their relationship they start arguing with each other, thus she takes off, and later it takes team RWBY fighting Adam to prove him they can.

I'm using Toa Tahu from Bionicle as a basis as he was known to have his heart in the right place, but was hot-headed, headstrong, and kinda a jerk to those outside his tribe such as his fellow Toa until his encounter with the Rahkshi and recovering knocked some sense into him.

And when Adam joins the good guys, I was actually thinking about shipping him with Yang, his stoic no-nonsense and occasionally hammy personality complementing Yang's flirtatious "Party-Girl" attitude and Blake and Adam both being "Beast" figures, one feminine and one masculine, and Sun and Yang being "Beauty" figures, also being respectively masculine and feminine, and the couples could play off each other pretty well.

That and the White Fang and Adam over the story become so much more, I'm using "The Chronicles of Narnia" as a basis, which I'm listening to and near the end of Prince Caspian

Been working on my reimagined AU and its quite unorthodox and I'm not sure you would like it, but I think it would just make more sense of make Blake and Adam more like brother and sister and make him an initial antagonist turned ally just looking at the story, world, and characters in retrospect and what they could have been.

Oh absolutely. I don’t mind Tauradonna but I prefer a platonic relationship between the two that emphasizes the broken mentor/student dynamic.

Adam becoming a terrifying enemy and then reforming to become an ally - all the while pushing those around him to confront their internal biases - is my bread and butter. Keeping him involved in the story and taking him seriously opens the door to flesh out the WF plot and Blake herself.

From what you’ve described, it doesn’t sound unorthodox at all for an AU, but no doubt there are worldbuilding and other aspects you left out :)

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Looking at your Good!Dad Jacques for inspiration for my AU and I feel like he’s a mix between M. Gustave from Grand Budapest Hotel and Obi Wan Kenobi, though I might just projecting mind lol

I hope those are good things because I don't know anything about either character. I've never heard of Grand Budapest Hotel. I know about Star Wars but I have never watched any of the films - my biggest crime in the world haha.

I really need to draw Good!Dad Jacques again, that was such a quick idea that was still fun.


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If anything, we should be asking *Filthy Frank Voice*

“But-wha…Why do you give a shit?”

Also these are the same guys who say “They’re fiction, their no real, chill my man, it’s not that deep”

Then how the fuck is it delusion then? Especially when it’s an AU and the most of us aren’t trying to claim to be canon?

Also isn’t fanfiction originally the original way people viewed storytelling in the old days or something?

It’s all about controlling other people with these fandoms, it’s the fact they want to control or at the very least suppress what you think, feel, and create…

your ship isn't canon.

And what if I keep living in blissful delusion? What then?


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After what Amazon did to Tolkien’s work and what Disney is doing to Snow White?

The majority of Hollywood can bite me

canonseeker trying to act like RT is unfairly hated compared to Disney or Amazon? little does he know I'm an anti-capitalist and hate all corporations equally. :)

Lol right? Like… do you think I… support Disney and Amazon?

Canonseeker Trying To Act Like RT Is Unfairly Hated Compared To Disney Or Amazon? Little Does He Know

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How about we just stop “subverting” things in gener

We get it CRWBY, Rian Johnson, and the rest of Hollywood, your very smart and artistic.

I Have Seen Stretches Before, But This Is A Stretch So Hard That It'd Kill Stretch Armstrong.
I Have Seen Stretches Before, But This Is A Stretch So Hard That It'd Kill Stretch Armstrong.

I have seen stretches before, but this is a stretch so hard that it'd kill Stretch Armstrong.

I Have Seen Stretches Before, But This Is A Stretch So Hard That It'd Kill Stretch Armstrong.
I Have Seen Stretches Before, But This Is A Stretch So Hard That It'd Kill Stretch Armstrong.

I'd say "I'm starting to think you don't know what that means" but let's be honest, "tropes" means "expectations" in your language.


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