I Have One Scene I Really Love, But At The End It Doesn't Fit In The Story AND I'M SO BUMMED OUT ABOUT

I have one scene i really love, but at the end it doesn't fit in the story AND I'M SO BUMMED OUT ABOUT THAT. I had even already made art about it, like look at this shit:

what am i supposed to do with this now??

Yes! In this story is have i think a little bit of both. I have one character that lies a lot (but we don't know it till half of the story) and i decided to have him put his hands on his pockets everytime he lies. Just a little detail i like, i don't know if it's either of those things but its cool. Also i put an incredible foreshadow in the story at one point that i can't really explain rn without spoilering everything and also explaining a lot of lore, but its very good i swear lmfao

Usually i come up with the basics: who is the main character, where and when does he live, the premise aka why are we doing this in the first place, then some ideas come, i draw all the characters to have a better grasp on them, and then i write, then i draw, and then i write again, back and forth.

Day 3

What’s your favorite scene you’ve written? Why is that one your favorite?

Do you use symbolism and/or foreshadowing often? Why or why not? If so, give an example if you’d like.

What is your process like when coming up with a story?

oh my favorite trope? two people who go through something so unique and agonizing and entirely beyond words that they have no choice but to create a bond that transcends all other types of love, thus acting as the sole point of understanding for the other person in a world that cannot fathom what they’ve been through

I will post stuff about my ocs, my writing process, and writing in general

My story: Azrael

I have my art commissions open, if you're interested check them out here!!

📂 linktree (artfight too if you want to draw these guys)

🧃my art account: @sigmalaussene

[Please don't repost my art without asking!🌻]

"top ten ways to improve your art!" "tips for small artists to get more reach" "how to improve this person's art" "here are some industry-standard art programs to use" what if all of you just died

We're gonna answer for Serge and Akthi:

Serge: idk bread or something. Akthi: the first meal he cooked for himself, probably a soup idk

Serge: getting beat up, playing with his little sister Jaqueline, makeup and dressup (future). Akthi: cooking (future), reading, inventing new creative ways to hide his boobs

bold of you to think they have any comfort or a safe place. They look up to the sky to see the stars btw

Day 7

What is your OC's favorite food? Why is this food their favorite?

What hobbies do your OCs have?

When in need of comfort or a safe place to go, who or what would they go to?

Does anyone have heist movies/TV shows/books to recomend?

I'm writing a story about a heist and I really need some reference for it. It can be both period pieces and modern ones.

Please people of Tumblr, help!