Astarionconsort - Yes, My Treasure?

Camellia sinensis, Chinese variety, 十八学士shi ba xue shi (eighteen scholars)

My inquisitor Anaka Lavellan

I finally found the words to describe why I feel like the Inquisitor has no personality (besides the obvious) it’s the humorous options.

In the other games the humorous options were good because they were So Out Of Pocket and inappropriate. You cant consistently use funny options without being. a bit of an asshole at times.

The inquisitor’s funny options are dinner party funny. You cant be a scoundrel or a lovable asshole or an annoying little shit. Even at your funniest you’ve just got the personality of. A guy trying to charm his girlfriends family. Or his boss, which I guess is the point. But still.

If Jyggalag wants to be taken seriously as the god of sensible and boring things he might consider changing his name to anything other than Jyggalag

I’m not sure who needs to hear this but writing fics shouldn’t have the sole purpose/goal of getting loads of hits/notes.

Write it with the purpose of fulfilling your own enjoyment first and foremost. The hits will come over time and if they don’t, who cares!

Someone out there will still read your works and cherish them just as much as you do.