When He Calls You Randomly Just Because >>>>>>>
when he calls you randomly just because >>>>>>>
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Come Back (an original poem)
Okay so that ended rather abruptly and out of the blue;
And I think the worst part is, I can't even make myself hate you.
Your reasons were valid, you want to get closer to God;
You broke up with me, so I have to piece back together my facade.
I tested my baby names with your last,
But now I think we may just be a thing of the past.
Maybe not. Maybe you'll get it all figured out and you'll come back,
But I pray you really figure it out because it's a lot to unpack.
I don't think you understand, I threw aside my mask.
I showed you the real me, you didn't even have to ask.
But now I don't know what to do.
Because, despite ending things, I still really like you.
I FINISHED D4!!!!!!!! i ended with a total of 39,013 words (still under writing but whatever) and i'm super super happy with it
realizing i have no idea what being flirted with actually looks like when faced with the possibility it's actively happening to me
this dude told me he expects nothing less than the greatness that comes out of my brain (i was literally ranting about my book and how difficult i make things for myself) like????? sir?????? are you flirting with me???
he told me my plants probably ARE as happy as i was telling him they were because they get to be next to me all day (queue mouth dropping) SIR???
i asked for forgiveness in a goofy Olde English accent and HE PLAYED ALONG????? SIR??????
HE WANTS TO BUILD LEGOS WITH ME????? SIR?????
anyways. should i marry him?
Questions to ask beta readers
General:
Were you confused at any point of the story?
What genre would you say this book is?
When did you put the story down?
Is the ending satisfying?
If you had to cut 3 scenes what would they be?
When did you feel like the story really began?
What was the last book you read before this story?
Characters:
Do you get any of the characters names confused?
Which character is your favorite?
If you had to remove a character who would you and why? (you don't have to remove the character, just make sure their role is meaningful)
Which character do you relate to the most?
Which character do you relate to the least?
Do the characters feel real?
Are character relationships believable?
Are the goals clear and influence the plot?
Are the characters distinct (voice, motivations, etc)
Setting:
Which setting was clearest to you?
Which setting was the most memorable?
Am including enough/too much detail?
Plot and conflict:
Are the internal and external conflicts well defined for the main characters?
Are the internal conflicts and the external conflicts organic and believable?
Are there enough stakes?
Are the plot twists believable but still unexpected?