I Found A Fanfiction From A Past Sparktober That I Wrote And Just Needed A Little Editing. It's A Fluffy

I found a fanfiction from a past Sparktober that I wrote and just needed a little editing. It's a fluffy kidfic where John tells Elizabeth and his kids a bedtime story.

“Colonel Sheppard. I’m going to assume that you’re still at the midway station waiting for Doctor McKay to rewrite his macro. I understand what you’re doing, Colonel. Hell, I’ll even call it brave.”

Hanleia + Your Ships that Were Probably Inspired by Them  » Sparky [Stargate Atlantis]

The flower that blooms in adversity is the most rare and beautiful of all. 

Mulan (1997), dir. Tony Bancroft, Barry Cook.

Chapters: 1/? Fandom: Stargate Atlantis Rating: Teen And Up Audiences Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings Relationships: John Sheppard/Elizabeth Weir Characters: John Sheppard, Elizabeth Weir, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan, Carson Beckett, Ronon Dex Additional Tags: Fluff and Humor, Halloween Costumes, Dialogue Heavy Summary:

Elizabeth Weir knew she never should have let John Sheppard pick their costumes for the Halloween party. This story fulfills the Sparktober 2021 Bingo card prompts for “Off-Duty” and “Halloween.”

Stargate Atlantis thoughts - The Storm vs. Common Ground

I find it so funny that Kolya thinks Elizabeth will give in after seeing Sheppard fed upon in Common Ground.  Kolya definitely has the whole thing backwards.  John is the one who’d give in.  Note in The Storm he’s ready to give Kolya a ship the minute Elizabeth is threatened.