Hey, I Need Some Advice!

hey, i need some advice!

i am finally getting into writing fanfic and wanted to know if this sounded good so far! any advice and tips are welcome! it will be published on wattpad! it'll be a reader x namjoon fic with an oc insert!

TW: contains mentions of marijuana, alcohol, sexual assault, and gore. 

The only thing that (Y/N) could see before her was blurred images of the partygoers as a large, calloused hand swallowed her small, delicate one. A kaleidoscope of soft light twisted and turned as she stumbled up the stars, the music being a muffled thump as she tried to regain focus.

"I might not know much about parties but I know you're never supposed to mix drugs or take anything a stranger offers, that's common sense.", reminded a small, gentle voice whom (Y/N) couldn't remember at the time. She traced her thoughts as the room got dark, momentarily reveling in the blast from the AC unit, unaware that the door was locked behind her. The only thing she remembered was threatening her younger siblings to not snitch or follow her, walking through a worn out path, hitting a bong, and downing 5 cups containing a liquid that made her face burn and set a fire in her chest.

Her back hit a soft surface as a shadow loomed over her. She furrowed her brows, confused as she heard a zipper.

"What are you doing?", she asked, speech slurred as she pushed the rough hands away as they they rubbed her thighs, going too far up her skirt.

A reply was mumbled as she felt the same hands turn her face to the side, a hot, sickly breath fanning over her face that caused her to gag. She reached her hands out to push weakley, earning a sharp slap that left a stinging sensation which in return caused a scream to erupt from her throat.

In an instant, the door slammed open, bringing in a bright light along with two silhouettes, the larger one grabbing for her, lifting her up off the soft surface as the smaller one went straight for the person with the rough hands. As her focus came into view, soft, brown eyes looked into her glazed, (E/C) ones, full of concern.

"Tae? What are you doing here?", she asked, recognizing her younger brother.

He began to reply but was cut off by a crash followed by a blood-curdling scream. (Y/N) turned and her heart lurched into her throat by the scene before her.

Red was splattered across the mattress where she laid and the wall behind it as blood pooled on the floor, traveling towards her and her brother. The owner of the the rough hands, Insu Choi being the owner, laid in the blood, clutching his crotch as blood seeped through his fingers, looking up at the perpetrator, his face contorted in pain as he yelled; "YOU FUCKING NIGHT TERROR", before meeting his end by what looked like a long, black, jagged piece of rock with razor-sharp edges protruding out of it. The squelch of tissue and muscles ripping combined with the sound of his bones shattering caused (Y/N) to feel faint and her stomach rumble. There was nothing left of his face but a cavity as the item was removed which sent (Y/N) over the edge as she turned and heaved chunks , feeling her brother beginning to shake. Looking up, a crowd had gathered outside the room, their faces stricken with terror before chaos and screaming ensued. Looking back, she was met with glowing, golden eyes that seemed to swirl with madness behind, circular, wire-rimmed glasses that set on a soft, round face a lovely shade of burnt umber that was splattered with blood.

That was the last thing (Y/N) saw before the world went dark. 

Dear black readers,

Don’t be afraid to write that fanfic . Regardless of the film, celebrity, book, show, character, sexuality, genre, or whether you think it's good or not write it! There isn't nearly enough fan fiction for us to appreciate or relate to as it is. We’re just as important as any other reader and if the fandom claims that the character would never be interested in a black person, and?! How the hell they know? There's a reason it’s called fan fiction... Don't be ashamed to write it because you fear nobody will read it, they will. It's important, in my opinion, that black readers be able to visualize themselves in the book. So write the story! 🫶🏾

- Ary 💜

and her fans are quick to say “BUT SHE ENCOURAGED US TO VOTE” okay? ppl been doing that 🤨.

i can handle taylor swift being one of the best modern example of white mediocrity in both music and feminism to date as well as her being a terrorist to the environment but when i see her fans doing all these grand things for her (like mass reporting anyone who criticizes) i really wish that she would use that influence to speak out about the current genocides instead

hiii I just read your fic sample for wattpad and baby im gonna need the rest like…now. it is so good img i cant wait to read the rest if/when you post it. ur a really good writer so far and i know ur gonna write something incredible😘🫶🏾

AHHHH!!! thank you sm! 🥺 i have put my writing on the back burner for so long 😭

it’s gonna be a namjoon x black!reader fic w an OC (black too lol) insert here and there. i am so excited for it and will post the link when the first chapter drops. 🫶🏿

POSSESSIVE TEXTS

𝐬𝐲𝐧𝐨𝐩𝐬𝐢𝐬: when they’re possessive 𝗽𝗮𝗶𝗿𝗶𝗻𝗴 : enha x 𝑓．𝗋𝖾𝖺𝖽𝖾𝗋 𝗴𝗲𝗻𝗿𝗲 : fluff , crack , smau 𝗿𝗲𝗾𝘂𝗲𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗱 : an idea by @dioll ♡︎ 𝘄𝗮𝗿𝗻𝗶𝗻𝗴𝘀 : sewer slide jokes, enha is a bit jealous, profanity, lmk if i missed anything

( 𝒎𝒊𝒍𝒂𝒏’𝘀 𝗻𝗼𝘁𝗲𝘀 ) : did i use my own pics? yes, yes i did. (thank u nae for this idea im sorry it took so long)

𝒉𝐞𝐞𝐬𝐞𝐮𝐧𝐠 ;

𝒋𝐚𝐲 ;

𝒋𝐚𝐤𝐞 ;

𝒔𝐮𝐧𝐠𝐡𝐨𝐨𝐧 ;

𝒔𝐮𝐧𝐨𝐨 ;

𝒋𝐮𝐧𝐠𝐰𝐨𝐧 ;

𝒓𝐢𝐤𝐢 ;

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