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Hellfire

I write fiction, dystopian/whump/apocalyptic. Currently writing my WIP, sharing some of my scenes here for feedback.

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Quick Question Tho, Does Anyone Else Hate That Theyre Called Whumpees/whumpers?? Like Im Reading Some

Quick question tho, does anyone else hate that they’re called whumpees/whumpers?? Like I’m reading some whump inspo and it’s all dark and angsty and there’s the word whumpee in it and I can no longer take it seriously…

Just me? Okay.


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9 months ago

Literally my whole book lol, I love it sm

Death is a mercy you don’t get

I am so obsessed with any “but I’m going to make you wish I had killed you” line


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9 months ago

Random list of whumpy things I enjoy:

Internal bleeding/coughing up blood

Leaning against a wall for support, their legs give out and blood smears down the wall

Sarcastic whumpees

Suicidal whumpees/whumper getting annoyed because death threats don’t work on them like “I’ll fucking kill you” “I’ll help.”

Scolded for things like: bleeding on something, not smiling (“your prettier when you smile”) passing out

Whumper calling whumpee dear/darling/sweetie etc.

Whumper being so incredibly sweet to whumpee, combing hair with fingers, bandaging/caring for cuts, washing them, wiping away tears

When the whumper takes advantage of old cuts/wounds, ripping open, kicking stab wounds


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9 months ago

Lol these were my notes for my 2nd book. It was three am.

Somehow being hurt/blood makes it safer?

Maybe opposite tho… like u CANNOT FUCKING BLEED (wouldn’t that be spooky)

The endlist snatches up the government

Maybe things change when yaz dies and someone else in charge so things get worse

Driving in a truck, Frankie is speeding, blaire asking them to slow down, Tara just kinda enjoying herself, Frankie promising they would never let anything happen to her, they KISS HER HAND omg

Abandoned buildings

Stealing Raman from abandon gas station

Bit of idk ya know

Wait wtf did I mean by the above??

Someone dies?

New character/love interest for Tara

Does Tara work well with a love interest??

Walls?

Creatures? Like ppl have disease? Idk r we just running from like humans or is it deeper

Blood (sorry I think it’s hot)

Blood in hot way/in like I’m dying way

VAMPIRISM

^probs not tbh^

Wait but NOSEBLEEDS THO


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9 months ago

She’s just not ready, give her some time, she needs to marinade in my head a bit longer before I can put it on paper.

Yes I want to write my story but my story doesn't want to be written so what the fuck am I supposed to do about that huh?

9 months ago

I love my little fictional characters!

violently tortures them