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Short Chapter #2

You can just think of the short chapters as fillers if you want idc. Also I started school no so long ago(Aug 20th) and the up dates will be even more slow because it my last year in middle school and that means a lot of school work that I will be doing so I how I won't get far behind in my school work in the future if I don't then I will have some time to work on this fic. Hope you understand! Also some of the short chapters with be from the chapters that already out and some are not!

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"Wait you a father?" Lang Qianqiu asked Qi rong with a question tone. "Yes I am a father! I'm a very proud father! My cheep son is better than you!" He told him then lift his head high and proud smile on his face. "Okay then...and why is your son is getting taken by Ju wun?" He asked him while pointing at Ju wun taking Guzi while he is picking up flowers for his father because he thought he would like them.

"GUZI!" Qi rong yelled then went towards him. "Get your ugly ass hands away from my cheep son!" He told Ju wun and picking up Guzi in his arms while giving him a glare. "I don't what you're talking about." He told him and it was clear that he knows what his talking about. "I'm not trying to kidnap your son or take his soul promise." He was lying. He was definitely trying to kidnap and take his son soul. "You think I believe you?" Qi rong sounded unimpressed by what he is saying. "You are not taking my cheep son again!"

Lang Qianqiu watched Qi rong cures out Ju wun. He is just ignoring that fact that Qi rong is cursing him out and just focusing on his beautiful. I mean who wouldn't? He is a true beauty in his eyes. Just like the first time that met. He fell first and Qi rong fell harder but he will never admit that. Pei Ming just looked at him then at Qi rong and just sighed. "What am I going to do with this kid..." He said under his breath.

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Lmao! This was made to fix my boredom and lack of motivation. I will get chapter five done! It just that I sometimes forget that I have a chapter to complete and I keep telling yall I would get it done and it been 2 months...I'm sorry yall my memory is just not great at something's sometimes. But I hope you enjoy this short chapter for this fic!

Here is a pick of the fifth chapter of Qiurong!

"I'll go to the temple of Tai Yong'an! And..and!" Lang Qianqiu say excitedly and happily while having a smile across his face. Then his happy face disappeared and turned around facing Xie Lian and Hua Cheng then he started walking towards them. Hua cheng have his around Xie Lian should and Xie Lian is close to him and his other arm is leaning on his chest and Xie Lian his holding a white cloth and having it close to him while having a soft smile on his face. Lang Qianqiu was facing them with sad face. He is sad about that fact that he has to leave them. "You're the greatest parents. That anyone could have.." Lang told them before his pause then sighed sadly. "But,.. I-I gotta know. I need to know. I got to know, who I am and where I truly belong." He finally said then looking out the window. Hua Cheng, Xie Lian, and Lang Qianqiu is now outside is the house and Hua Cheng and Xie Lian are standing at the entrance of the house and While Lang is not. The sun is rising in the sky and a cock(it a bird/chicken) making loud noise waking up people who have farms and animals. Lang has a bag across his chest and Xie Lian put a small blanket around his neck and over his shoulder then tie it so it won't come off. Lang goes in for hug and Xie Lian returns it follows by Hua Cheng. They all shared a hug together for this will be their last time seeing each other. Lang broke the hug and turned around and began walking off to his journey to find where he truly belongs. Lang look over his shoulder and his smile and wave them a goodbye and Xie Lian wave him a goodbye and Hua Cheng just had his arm wrapped around Xie Lian having him close to him.

"I am on my way." Lang started to say sing(imagine music in the background) "I can go the distance." Lang continued while walking in woods as the sun looked through the leaves of the trees until he reached an open area on a mountain road. "I don't care~ how far!" He sang now walking in large area of roses on the ground going for miles on end. Now he walking on side of a cliff with large rocks that you can walk on that can break with enough strength. "Somehow, I'll be strong." Then her knock over a large making as a bridge and walking on it going to the other side of it. "I know every mile.~"  It dark and gloomy as it rained and hard wind is blowing and Lang continued to walk and he saw a sign on a rock with temple on it that showed he is going the right way to Tai Yong'an temple. "Will be worth my while." Then rain has stopped now and it was dark and the only light was the moon. "I would go most anywhere." Lang sang once more. "To find where I belong!" He continued walking until his a hill with a temple on it and knew it was Tai Yong'an temple. He smiled and began to walk towards it.

Lang Qianqiu is now inside of the temple. He has his grip on his bag sleeve that is across his body and over his shoulder, walking more into the temple while looking around seeing pillar of top of pillar around him while he is walking down in the temple. Lang stop walking when he reaches at huge statue of Tai Yong'an sitting down in a chair with a stern look on his face and Lang look at up at the statue because how big it is compared to him. Lang took out the golden metal necklace out of his bag. Sitting perfectly in his hand then he lifted it up the golden metal then lifted it back down. He took the bag that is over his shoulder and took it off of him and placed it next to him while going on the ground and his knees hitting the ground. "Oh, mighty Tai Yong'an," Lang Qianqiu began to pray. "please hear me.., and answer my prayer." He continued to pray. "I need to know. Who am I? Where do I belong?" He finished praying then wind began to blow around in the temple messing up Lang Qianqiu hair just a bit and his eyes shrink a little bit as the wind blow once more. Then lightning came through the temple and head straight towards the statue of Tai Yong'an hitting it in the process. Lang duck down having his hands on top of his head to protect himself from the lightning but then the fire began to start to lit on around the temple making less dark and more light. Lang lift up his head while removing his hands off his head at the same and looked confused. "H-huh?" He said in a very much confused tone. The statue of the Tai Yong'an face began to crack and then the eyes began to move on his own and the statue is now able to move the arms, hands, and face freely. "My boy." The statue of Tai Yong'an began to speak to him and while Lang Qianqiu still in disbelief at what is happening right now and Tai Yong'an move his rock like arm to his chest and place his hand on it. "My..little Lang Qianqiu." He says to him while looking down at him. Then he leaned down to reach to pick him with his hand. "AHHHHHH!" Lang yelling at the top of his lungs. Then running away from the statue then tripping in the process and fell on the ground and not that far away from the statue. "Hey, hey! Hold there kiddo!" Tai Yong'an told with a slight chuckle. Tai grabbed him and lifted him up close to him. "What's your hurry?" He asked him and Lang is panicking and freaking out about the situation and what is happening right now. "After all these years and this the kind of hello you give to your father?" He said shocking Lang when he say the word 'father' in the sentence. "F-father?!" Lang said in still disbelief. "Didn't know you a such of a famous father did ya?" He laughed out loud. "Surprised!" He was excited and it obviously in the tone of his voice. "You grown so much." He is happy that his child is grown up and seeing him after all these years. "You have your mother beautiful eyes." He chuckled lightly before continuing what is saying. "and you have my strong chin! Ha!" He has pride in his voice when he said that part. "I-..I just dont understand! How you are my father?" Lang asked while looking down nervously then looking back up. "And that also makes me..." Lang started to talk but he paused because he is unsure about it. "A god." Tai Yong'an continues Lang Qianqiu sentence. "I'm..Im god..Im god!" Land said in shock about what he has just discovered about himself. He was a god and he even didn't know about it. "You wanted some answers? Correct?" Tai Yong'an said changing the topic into something else. "By the thunder you're old enough to know the truth! My boy!" Tai Yong'an explained to him. "But..why did you leave me? On earth?" He asked wondering why did HIS own father left him all by himself in an unknown place when he was just a newborn baby. "Did you didn't even want me...?" He continued to question in this depressed tone of his voice. "Of course we did. We wanted you." Tai Yong'an tone of voice softened. "Your mother and I loved you so very much." His voice began to crack a little bit as he continued to speak. "But..someone stole you from us! An

Sorry for being gone for a month and some weeks…heheh and @purplew I promise that the fifth chapter will come out! And I think I also broke the limit of words on this post idk..but fifth chapter will be out! I promise!

There were more to the pick of the fifth chapter but it got cut off when I pasted it(I’m not writing all of the those words that I did)

Sneak peak of the updated version of chapter four

when that happened all the other pillars began to collapse. The pillars were falling down and people and the animals were running away from the falling pillars trying not to get hurt. Lang threw the other pillar on the other side where those pillars haven’t fallen yet then Lang began running to the other side then he stopped and said. “Hey! Whoa!” In shocked and worried in his tone as he saw the pillars falling like ones on the other side. Lang ran past Xie Lian. “Lang!” Xie Lian called for him and lang responded with “Hang on! Pop! I be right back!” Lang explained to him and to continue to run past him.

“No no! Oh my! Don’t please!! No no!” The young men said in worried and scared voice while holding his pots in his hands then pillars stopped for a moment by but..Lang comes running towards him. “Watch out!” Lang warned him then spilled on oil that was on the floor then crashing into him breaking all of the pots that were in the young man hands and the pillars finally fell down.

Still in the making :3

Before the story began: The Beginning.(fixed! I just fix the grammar and spelling errors and mistakes.)

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This is original posted on my Wattpad account and I’m just posting it here.

This is just me explaining some things that is in the description of the book/story.

Let me get you guys straight. This a basically Hercules x tgcf au and the owner of the au is @purplew who let me write about this story and it very happy that I'm making this and I have been looking forward for this story and some of the characters will out of character to fit or some of the characters won't have to be out of character but some will...I think.

I watched the movie for the idea and what I think it will be good for it and whole bunch of things and I'm writing this at night on my phone! So that's even more great!

Thanks again for @purplew for letting me write this! Plus this my first time wring a fanfic for someone/somebody! You can find them on Tumblr some got check them out if you want!

I'm really excited about this! It been over a month that I got permission to do this but I never a have an idea for it until now! I'm happy that I'm finally able to type it for you guys so you can all read it! I'm very grateful for this!

But anyways let begin our story!

A story about Lang Qiu qian as Hercules!

And his adventures and how he save his home and the people he loves from Jun wu! Let's the story begin!

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"Long ago in the land of Ancient China there was a golden age of powerful gods and extraordinary hero's across the lands of China. The greatest and strongest of them all was Lang Qiu Qian! But what is the measure of a true hero?  That's what our story is—." The narrator was stopped mid sentence by a muse."Will you listen to him?" Said a man with long beautiful hair that is up in the tight bun with some bangs on the side of his face and will have an annoyed face with his arms crossed over his chest. The person next to him has long hair just like him but with a high ponytail but some of his hair is out of the ponytail and has bangs across his face. There is another person as well. He has long hair that is up in a bun and the rest of it loose and he has his fan in his hand with a hand on his hip. Last but not least is another guy who has the most beautiful black hair , a very high ponytail and one long bang on the right side of his face.

"His making the story sound like some tragedy!" Said Shi Qingxuan while putting one of his hands on his hip and the other one on his forehead and let out a dramatic sigh. "Light up dude." Mu Qing said then uncrossed his arms. "We take it from here darling~." Shi Qingxuan said smiling softly and now he has his hands on his hips. "You go boys." The narrator said with his deep and monologue voice in existence. (A/N: just imagine groovy music playing in the background.) "We are the Muses." Mu Qing said while the rest of them posed next to him and while he raised his arms in a pose. "Gods of the arts and proclaimers of heroes." Feng Xin continued from Mu Qing words.

"Hero's like Lang Qiu Qian." Xuan said while removing his arms across from his chest and walked next to the rest of them. "You mean Lang-QiuQian!" Shi Qingxuan said dramatically while fanning his fan back in and forth with his left hand. Then he walked towards a painting of Lang Qiu Qian and stood next to it. "Oooo~ I would like to make some sweet music with~." He says with a smile coming from his lips. Then Feng Xin glances at him while saying. "Our story actually began long before Lang Qiu Qian." "Many eons ago.." He Xuan continued off from Feng Xin. "Ooh!" Shi Qingxuan sang in a high tone. "Back when the world was new." Mu Qing sang and went towards others and formed a line. "The plant earth was down on its luck." He Xuan sang and Shi Qingxuan followed them in the line and began to walk with them in a line and while they walked in the line there were paintings of gods and goddesses.

"And everywhere gigantic brutes called titans ran up!" Shi Qingxuan sang and the rest of them walked towards a painting of the titans and they were moving and they were throwing stones and rocks and ruining the earth. "It was a nasty place." He Xzan explained in a singing voice. "There was a mess whatever you stepped!" He Xuan continued to explain while singing. "Where chaos reigned." Mu Qing sang after He Xuan while continuing the story. "And the earthquakes and volcanoes never slept." Feng Xin continued after him while still singing. "Woo! Say it girlfriend!" Shi Qingxuan explained.

Then they were not by the painting any more; they were in a different area of the room. There is a painting of Tai Yong'an.(A/N: Not his office name because we don't know his real name yet and same thing with his wife.) "Then along came Tai Yong'an!" They all sang in unison while pointing up at a painting of Tai Yong'an who is Lang Qiu Qian's father. Then the painting begins to move and it shows him aiming at the titans with his arrows and using his spirit energy with it together. "He hurled his arrows!" They continued to sing together. "He shot! Locked those suckers in a vault! They're trapped! And on his own stopped chaos on its tracks!" And now they are lined up next to each other with spaces between them and behind them is white wall.

"And that's gospel truth!" They sang with excitement. (A/N: Imagine upbeat music in the background.) "The guy was too type a to just relax!" They continue while they dance to the music while they sing. "And that's the world's first dish." He Xuan sang. (A/N: image the upbeat is now calm and more relaxed but have some upbeat to it but not that much.)  "Yeah baby!" Shi Qingxuan sang after him. "Tai Yong'an tamed the globe while still in his youth." Feng Cin sang but more calmly. "All though, honey it may seem impossible!" They all sang together again. (A/N: Upbeat music in the background again.) "That's the gospel truth!" They sang together while putting their left hand on their chest while the other one was raised in the air. Then they put their hands and arms down, then they pointed at a painting of Heaven and they sang. "On the Heavens life was neat!" They continued to sing.

"And smooth and sweet vermouth!" They ran in circles in the same area "Although honey, it may seem impossible!"  Then they spin and continue singing. "That's the gospel truth!" (A/N: Imagine upbeat and humming in the background.) Now if the sky is clear as day there are farms with animals eating grass or hay that their owners give them to eat and small towns and a house on a hill that have a lot of grass on it then there is the Heavens where gods and goddesses and officials work and live.

This is where our hero Lang Qiu Qian story begins! This is just the beginning of our hero! He will face many things in his life but will face them like a true hero his!