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Kirara

Yo welcome to my blog. Art background was obviously made by me, honestly i should start drawing digitally but nah, later.

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So I Decided To Draw A Memory Of Me And Jack Messing Around In The Broken Ship Enchantment Place Beacouse

So I Decided To Draw A Memory Of Me And Jack Messing Around In The Broken Ship Enchantment Place Beacouse
So I Decided To Draw A Memory Of Me And Jack Messing Around In The Broken Ship Enchantment Place Beacouse

So i decided to draw a memory of me and Jack messing around in the broken ship enchantment place beacouse i missed him very much :"")

*Cries*

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2 years ago

Writing Advice

For the love of god, don't write a character being an expert (especially the BEST EXPERT) in anything you don't personally want to research.


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2 years ago

YO WHAT???

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Project Aviary is in-development and we're excited to give you a sneak peek at what we're cooking up 🫣 🐦

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2 years ago

OMG THAT SOUNDS GOOD

Putting them in amongst my headcannons

Thinking about sky cotl's equivalent to mlp's "everypony" being "everylight". Considering skykids have a mental connection with all light creatures, I think it would be cool. Imagine a skykid walking into very dark cave and going like: "Hello? Is anylight here?"

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2 years ago

So, I'm writing a fanfiction with OCs and well, it doesn't exactly line up with some of the canon information because it wasn't there before. I know there are AUs and stuff but it's not divergent enough and with new information.. I'm not sure what I should do or make some sort of attempt to change my writing for it

Thanks for your question!  I will say that I don’t exactly understand the question, so if my answer doesn’t apply to your situation, feel free to message me with more details.  But let me see if I understand what you’re asking.

Alternate Universe Fanfiction

AUs are tricky things to write, because you want your creative liberty but you’re never sure how much is up for change – what you need to keep consistent – what’s innovative and what’s lazy.  If I’m right here, you’re saying that you have a few small changes or inconsistencies between your fic and the source material, but not enough changes to declare it an AU?  Or maybe that your changes don’t have a reason behind them (e.g. a canon character is missing but there’s no reason why)?

Either way, I think the solution is to take a few minutes and compare your world (be it an AU or not) and the canonical world, and list out the differences.  Classify them as minor or major differences – focus on the major differences.  If a character is missing, if you’ve changed a concept, if you’ve changed the course of the plot, check these items and make sure you have reasons behind them.  Why did these things happen this way?  Why aren’t these two characters together?  Why is there a conflict in the details?  If you can come up with plausible reasons for everything, then there’s no reason to change anything.  These are your creative liberties.

If you have changed things with no real reason, though, then you might want to reconsider what you’re doing.  If you change singular events (e.g. the second Hunger Games never happened) then it’s an AU – if you change ongoing events (e.g. cutting out Katniss’s relationship with Gale) then you’re gonna need more explanation, or even a preface before the story.  In this example, if Katniss didn’t have her relationship with Gale, she would be a completely different person.  That can be hard to believe for your readers.

The thing that helps me in these situations is that, if I want to change/remove a relationship/character/event, I go back to a particular canon event and use it to change/remove them.  For instance, if I wanted to remove Gale from Katniss’s life before the events of Catching Fire, I could use the Hunger Games as a tool to separate them.  I could say that they’re no longer close because she changed after the Hunger Games, so they drifted apart.  It’s still an AU, but if I can draw it back to a singular pivoting point, then it becomes believable.

I’d like to note a difference, also, between AU and headcanon.  Headcanons are typically non-canon events/relationships/scenes that could technically fit into the canon, while AUs are built on ideas that couldn’t work with the canon.  If you’re merely adding information to a story or universe, you’re building headcanons, and that doesn’t have to be classified as an AU.  You don’t have to actually build an alternate reality just to add in your personal ideas.

So to sum up, if I’ve answered your question at all: try to make your ideas align with the canon, and if you can’t, draw your changes back to a single event.  If you’re only adding to the story, it’s headcanon and doesn’t need to be labeled AU.  If you’re subtracting/changing lore, characters, or events, it should be labeled AU in the summary with a brief explanation of the changed events in a prefacing author note.

If none of this was what you’re looking for, hit me up with another ask or a DM and I’ll do my best to help!

If you need advice on general writing or NaNoWriMo, you should maybe ask me!


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2 years ago

Fanfiction help, tips, prompts and ideas

I planned on making this a private post just to help me find all the links and wonderful help made by these wonderful people but it can be helpful for others too to have it all in one place.

But if the creators of these would like me to take down/private the post please let me know and I will, no problem ^^

Dialogue Promts, tips, ideas; everything:

dumplingsjinson's Dialogue promts[They're great with so many different dynamics]:

PROMPTS MASTERLIST
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Continuously updated! *you can use my prompts as long as you link to the prompt list you grabbed the prompt from, as well as mentioning my

Tips on writing characters without faces:

Tips on Writing Characters Without Faces
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so yeah, we all know that facial expressions can tell us a lot about how a character is feeling, but what if that isn’t an option? how can y

Describing emotions internally and externally:

Resources For Describing Emotion
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Emotions Without Making Your Character Feel Too Self Aware Showing Emotion Without Telling About It Emotions Associated With Body Language T

Writing recourse masterlist:

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Masterlist of… Facial Expressions 50 Romance Plot Ideas Gestures and Body Language Physical Descriptions Voice Descriptions Writing Sex/Body

Body language basics(smiles, eyebrows, head positions:

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Body Language Basics In any story, half of the information given to the reader is never spoken out loud.  It’s body language, and body langu

List of body language phrases (positions, reactions, movements like "he arched his back"), divided by body parts:

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A list of body language phrases. I’ve included a very comprehensive list, organized by the type of body movement, hand and arm movements, fa

agirlnamedjana's master dialogues/scenes/dynamics promt list:

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Romantic Prompts Romance Story Starters Romantic Questions Prompts Romance Prompt Lists (Masterpost) Bad romances/unrequited/break-up Master

And also her masterpost on how to write/motivation/tips:

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Compilation of writing advice for some aspects of the writing process. How to motivate myself to write more How to get rid of writer’s block

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