Pinterest Never Surprising Me! This Is What I Found Few Seconds Ago And Wow, This Is Wild. People Are

Pinterest never surprising me! This is what I found few seconds ago and wow, this is wild. People are fucking wild in the comments section...

Those antis are really sick if they think something like that. I'm not into incest that much, but I'm not crying over a fucking fictional ship, jeez... That's why I don't want to associate with Pinterest people. Full of antis, full of sick and brainless antis there.

I should blame myself when I'm not bother by this ship or even the scene where they kissed weren't that sick? I read a fic with Marty and his dad today two times and thought about them as cute couple, so now my house supposed to be burnt now?

I'm asking myself if I should create art with Marty and old, cool George in moment they will kiss so sweet to make antis so fucking mad.

Writing Intimacy

i often see writers sharing a sentiment of struggling with writing kiss scenes which honestly bleeds into other portrayals of physical intimacy. i see it a lot in modernized styles of writing popularized by the recent trend in publishing to encourage short, choppy sentences and few adverbs, even less descriptive language. this makes intimacy come across awkward, like someone writing a script or clumsy recounting of events rather than a beautiful paragraph of human connection.

or just plane horniness. but hey, horny doesn't have to be mutually exclusive with poetic or sensual.

shallow example: they kissed desperately, tongues swirling and she moaned. it made her feel warm inside.

in depth example: she reached for the other woman slowly and with a small measure of uncertainty. the moment her fingers brushed the sharp, soft jaw of her companion, eliza's hesitance slid away. the first kiss was gentle when she finally closed the distance between them. she pressed her lips lightly to gabriella's in silent exploration. a tender question. gabriella answered by meeting her kiss with a firmer one of her own. eliza felt the woman's fingers curling into her umber hair, fingernails scraping along her scalp. everything inside eliza relaxed and the nervousness uncoiled from her gut. a warm buzz of energy sunk through her flesh down to the very core of her soul. this was right. this was always where she needed to be.

the first complaint i see regards discomfort in writing a kiss, feeling like one is intruding on the characters. the only way to get around this is to practice. anything that makes you uncomfortable in writing is something you should explore. writing is at its best when we are pushing the envelope of our own comfort zones. if it feels cringy, if it feels too intimate, too weird, too intrusive, good. do it anyway! try different styles, practice it, think about which parts of it make you balk the most and then explore that, dissect it and dive into getting comfortable with the portrayal of human connection.

of course the biggest part comes to not knowing what to say other than "they kissed" or, of course, the tried and true "their lips crashed and their tongues battled for dominance" 😐. so this is my best advice: think beyond the mouth. okay, we know their mouths are mashing. but what are their hands doing? are they touching one another's hair? are they scratching or gripping desperately at one another? are they gliding their hands along each other's body or are they wrapping their arms tightly to hold each other close? do they sigh? do they groan? do they relax? do they tense? are they comfortable with each other or giddy and uncertain? is it a relief, or is it bringing more questions? is it building tension or finally breaking it?

get descriptive with the emotions. how is it making the main character/pov holder feel? how are they carrying those emotions in their body? how do they feel the desire in their body? desire is not just felt below the belt. it's in the gut, it's in the chest, it's in the flushing of cheeks, the chills beneath the skin, the goosebumps over the surface of the flesh. everyone has different pleasure zones. a kiss might not always lead desire for overtly sexual touches. a kiss might lead to the desire for an embrace. a kiss might lead to the impulse to bite or lick at other areas. a kiss could awaken desire to be caressed or caress the neck, the shoulder, the back, the arms etc. describe that desire, show those impulses of pleasure and affection.

of course there is the tactile. what does the love interest taste like? what do they smell like? how do they kiss? rough and greedy? slow and sensual? explorative and hesitant? expertly or clumsily? how does it feel to be kissed by them? how does it feel to kiss them?

i.e. examine who these individuals are, what their motives and feelings are within that moment, who they are together, what it looks like when these two individuals come together. a kiss is not about the mouth. it's about opening the door to vulnerability and desire in one's entire body and soul.

I love it even more. This really good stuff

Anyone else like to do the tragedy cliche in their incest ship stories, but twist it up?

I did the sister waiting for her brother on his birthday, but he's late, only to be told by the police there was an explosion at his work that caused a fire and they couldn't find his body, there's drama / sadness with the sister, but it's revealed later he's well and alive, then he meets up with his sister again.

Then I had another one with a father and daughter who in secretly dating are caught by this person who is the father's enemy and this person is gonna tell the police everything and that he abused his daughter, even though that didn't happen, but then that person dies in a car crash.

I love it!

A happy ending can sometimes be even more satisfying if you thought you were about to get a really sad one.

I think this kind of subversion trope is great for incest ships because we're so used to getting the unhappy endings.

Ask sakimichan or others like her, they keep creating like us. Police have better things to do, like real murder?

"it doesnt matter if its fictional or not!" then whats the difference? why isnt the police investigating r34 and ao3 the same way they investigate dark web sites? why is it wrong to hear someones trauma and then say "this is just like that one anime"?

This is bullshit, haha.

I'm literally in 17 fandoms. Where is Saw, Back to the Future, Borderlands, The Walking Dead, Fellow Travelers, The Evil Within, The Dark Pictures Anthology, Junji Ito?

I'm aware that this specific post is a joke, but people unironocally post these and then wonder why they either get zero interaction or keep running into folks on their DNI.

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