So This Is The Section That Might Have Been If I Didnt Tear It Apart And Put It In An Earlier Chapter

So this is the section that might have been if I didn’t tear it apart and put it in an earlier chapter and make Chapter 33 Marlene centric. It was written a VERY long time ago (probably when I was posting Chapter 23-ish?), so it’s bad, and you have some stuff like Madam Pince (who was supposed to replace Ms. Sevoy between years) making an appearance and some other things. All in all, I took some stuff and ditched the rest, but it does include Lily’s Soul-Bearing essay for Madam Keepdown.

If you’re angry that this didn’t turn out, remember that by ditching this we got Green Apple Shampoo, so….

(The Chapter 32 scene is actually much more romantic, because the Green Apple Shampoo scene gives James’s perspective. Dramatically, this is unnecessary because we’ve already had a chapter end with confirmation of Lily’s feelings. Plus Chapter 32 is all about Lily being all unrequited so it’s a nice change to have the James POV)

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feeding you with some remus art

So at one point, all the chapters had journal entries from Lily, not unlike Chapter.... Whatever That Was when there were journal entries from Lily.

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“My parents with their pure-blood mania.”

summers together

thinking about how fucked up it is that the MFP attack happened on a month that lily loved