Me Trying Not To Twitch At My Eye At The Mention Of Jihyo...

me trying not to twitch at my eye at the mention of jihyo...

i guess you didn’t like her? (sorry if i’m not understanding 😕)

My absolute favorite comments to get as a fic writer are the ones that are like "hey this porn you wrote is hot."

Because it is so hard to write good sex scenes. You're constantly wondering "is this actually hot or will it sound insane/cringey?" You're trying to hit emotional beats while not taking away from the sexiness. You're trying to make sure actions are clear and nothing gets all muddled and confusing for the reader. It requires you to really think about how the characters are going to react to everything that happens, so on top of making sure it's actually hot, you have to worry about if it's in-character for everyone involved. It's so much easier to write sex scenes that are bad on purpose than sex scenes that are actually good and meant to be hot.

So, yeah, I assure you, because the most common thing I hear people saying when they leave a comment about the sex scenes I write is "I hope it's not weird to comment on this scene," it's not weird at all and I appreciate it so much! I am literally never going to be mad at someone leaving a row of 🔥 emojis in their comment, I promise. If you're reading a fic and you think the sex scenes are well done, let the author know! That's likely one of the parts they're a bit nervous about working well so it'll mean so much to know you thought it was good.

There’s an entire tv series called I Didn’t Know I Was Pregnant. It happens more than you’d think. Tell thar anon to calm down

hi angel, thanks a lot 💛 yeah it happens more than one can imagine, and honestly, i thought more people knew about it but i guess i was wrong… this anon isn’t the only one unfortunately to have gone wild & i guess it was the last straw for me… a lot of other people nicely formulated that they didn’t know it but people really to calm down, it’s just a fic, there’s no need for all this disrespect… thanks again for your ask angel 💛💛

Hey! What's your zodiac sign?

hello, that’s a very surprising question but i’m a leo ♌️

So happy for Perfect time ❤️❤️❤️. I’m guessing OC is on slightly large body structure, is it mentioned on previous chapters? Is it possible for cryptic pregnancy to not show if your petite though 🤔 just kinda confused during the first part of the chapter.. but loooooveee itttt been waiting for Perfect time and I can say it’s worth the wait….

hi angel, thank you, that’s so sweet 🥹 well, you can imagine oc as you wish, she can be large, small, tall, petite, whatever you want. i didn’t give any description about that so you can picture you the way you want. for the cryptic pregnancy, i saw a documentary about it and it was women that were petite so i think it’s possible to have it no matter how your body is 🤷🏻‍♀️ i’m sorry for the confusion, I noticed some of you are, can you let me know what exactly is confusing? thanks a lot for your nice words angel 💖

please don’t take this the wrong way but :( you rushed things! like, you could’ve done so much with the story and the things that happened on the last past but it seems like you just wanted it to end so you threw a bunch of stuff in, things that would add a chapter or two if you got deep in it, if that makes sense. the last thing i would expect when i started reading was a sudden pregnancy or an 8 year skip and yeonjun becoming an addict like? that was too much for just ONE chapter. and 20 years? man, that’s a lot. and you could’ve kept that but only if you worked with those aspects of the story within the time you settled. besides the pregnancy, and yeonjun becoming a shitty man, you managed to throw two more characters that are literally there just because (jihyo and levi). like?

this isn’t meant to hurt you or anything, this is just coming from the perspective of a reader that had too much expectations on the story based on the time it took you to write and the potential you have.

hi angel ✨ this didn’t hurt, really you don’t have to worry about that! i’m always very open to constructive feedback and this one really was one! but if you want me to be completely honest, i simply didn’t know how to go deeper into details for everything added in this part. i also i have limited writing time, i’ve been very sick & i’ve been working a lot so honestly, it was quite hard for me to fully develop the details thrown in this part. i didn’t think it was too much info but now that you said it, i only can agree with you. i’m honestly sorry for that & i take note of this if i write again so thanks angel for your ask 💛