Complaints About The Fanfiction I'm Working On.

complaints about the fanfiction I'm working on.

It's the first one I've written, and I can't make the scenes flow from scene to scene, as Baz and Simon only meet once a week. I'm going to push on through the rough draft and see what happens. I'm still going to publish it, just to break the ice and get more confident, but it is so rough. Does anyone have any tips that could help me out a little? TIA.

For some reason I decided to start writing a fanfic, and I have never been more scared. Is there a right way to do this? A wrong way? I have an outline at least….

I just watched Goodbye, Don Glees for the first time and if you’ve never seen it, watch it now.

It’s about these misfit boys who go on an adventure to collect a drone they lost, and on the way they learn that we all grow up differently and that treasure is different for all of us. It had me laughing and crying and left me with such a deep sense of there is more to life and this world than I think there is.

I highly recommend it, the animation was absolutely beautiful. I watched the dub version, but I think you’ll have better luck understanding the story in sub.

Gruvia headcanon that Juvia is the breadwinner even though Gray goes on higher paying jobs solely because Gray’s group causes so much collateral damage that they barely scrape by enough to live off.

Hector and Isaac are so interesting and I can’t decide who I like more. I will admit to focusing solely on Trevor, Alucard, and Sypha in seasons 1-2, but can you blame me?

Isaac is complex and I can’t totally understand him but I do on a very minimal level. He flip flops around to me and has so many cool scenes in S3.

But Hector is like a kicked puppy… he is betrayed and used every step of the way, from before Dracula to Lenore. I think he has grown a lot, and now wants things other than necessities from the dungeon (in the dungeon he just wanted boots now he wants a life with Lenore and time to relax). He’s just a little simpler to understand so I guess he’s my favorite only because I can get his motivations.

I can’t wait to rewatch and see what I pick up on when actually knowing these two are main characters lol. Castlevania is so much better than I thought it would be…