Oh My Gosh Oh My Gosh Your Atsumu Fool Me Has Me In So Much Pain?!?!!! I Adore Everything About It It's
Oh my gosh oh my gosh your atsumu fool me has me in so much pain?!?!!! I adore everything about it 😭 it's probably the best break up fic I've read, especially with how it hits deep to a personal level. And the way you wrote it??? I couldn't help but be reminded of my own break ups lmaooo.
I think you trying to write a happy ending (thank you for trying) really brought us on a roller coaster ride, giving us hope exactly like how your heart goes "yes" but your self-respecting brain goes "no" in an actual break up 😃 As much as I wanted a happy end, you're right, it wouldn't make sense and I love mc for choosing herself even when it will hurt her some more and cause her to go through building walls all over again.
Both choices are pretty destructive imo but if she went back, she mightve ended up hating herself for putting up with it after all the shame and in turn destroy the newly restored relationship with tsumu. Not to mention the distrust whenever he'll show love, she'll always be reminded that he's capable of hurting her.
They both do need a lot of time apart. Maybe they can get a happy ending after like the timeskip or something. Anyways, sorry for the long ask just needed to share my thoughts 💗mwah
also loved samus role in all this
THANK YOU FOR TRYING im both laughing and crying holy fuck this made me tear up a little
It just shows me I achieved everything I wanted as I wrote the piece. It shows me that the characters weren't two dimensional, they were instead more than just characters I wrote for the sake of the story, but they were characters who's story I wrote.
I love how I could make you feel the indecision, the pull and push of the heart and logic, how it felt real, how it made sense it wasn't a happy ending because I really just wanted people to relate to it instead of just read a story. (and that wasn't something I could do with a happy ending)
And I tried, I really did try for so long- that's why it took me like 6 months because I forced a happy ending but never liked it.
I'm just rambling, I just wanted to say, thank you so much for sending this in! It shows me that I indeed did a good job portraying the emotions, and that's all I ever wanted to do. So thank you, thank you so much!
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This was the funniest thing I've ever read im still cackling
The fact that you know too much affection tires me out but am really sensitive is a)crazy b)scary c)really sweet to me
expose ur moots!
you've come to the right place
most of these are lighthearted and/or jokes bc I'm not mean enough to really expose my friends 👍
@milktyama - acts real cute but is (not so) secretly fed up and laughs at you from the comfort of her room. a brat, but a smart one. relatively harmless.
@strawberries-and-peppermint - hopeless romantic, but thinks she's selfish for wanting to be loved. an idiot with a big vocabulary.
@guooky - has questionably low standards for men. prefers the enemies stage of e2l over the lovers stage. a masochist. says she wants to fight me but really just likes the attention. shy irl.
@catzula - kins atsumu 👎but is relatively soft. show her genuine affection and she'll cry. sensitive, treat with care. but not too much bc that'll tire her out.
@elektrosonix - is 16 (happy birthday sweetheart /p)
@shoyotime - constantly brings up me being a tsundere in an attempt to cover up the fact that she is an even worse tsundere than me irl, and bc she was scared of me and apparently had no other ideas about how to start a conversation. good thing it worked out for her, huh?
@ch0s0 - my long lost twin. thinks skinny might is attractive.
@querenciaas - sent this ask this bc they wanted to be exposed, then exposed themselves by telling me they were the one who sent it. exact words were "expose ur true love for me 😻". likes to think they're secretive but really aren't. likes tsunderes a bit too much. another atsumu kin 😒
lila, you’re atsumu angst is bringing out some terrible memories for me oh my god I haven’t even finished it yet and i’m already crying i can’t bring myself to finish itttt😫 i know exactly how she feels, AND HES MY FAV WHY’RE YA DOING THIS TO ME
AHAHAHAHA making people cry is my passion 🥴😼
No but jokes aside IM GLAD IT COULD TOUCH YOUR EMOTIONS AT LEAST A LITTLE BECAUSE I KNOW EXACTLY HOW IT FELT AND WRITING IT WAS A NIGHTMARE
oh my god bae congrats on the milestone!!!! you deserve it all <33
i was literally searching for a cute meme to congratulate you but i found this-
Literally took me so long to read the original bruh AJDJAJEJS ZEY BABY THANK YOU SM
I was screaming I can't even tell you
Have a safe trip he moaned I'm gonna fucking die
I'm honored to be the one to beta for you pls that was so good
lila is a angel sent from the heavens @catzula