Hello Im The Anon That Asked For Writing Advice And I Want To Come Back To Sayu Are AMAZING !!! I Didnt

hello im the anon that asked for writing advice and i want to come back to say…u are AMAZING !!! i didn’t know what answer i expected from my ask but my jaw literally dropped when i saw the reply like..u took time to reply and it’s such a thoughtful response with REFERENCES(??!!!???!) and i just. ugh. you are amazing!! thank u for sharing your work and creative process <3

OMG HI !! im so sorry for the late response but AAUGHGHH TYSM!! Im so happy !! i have a habit of rambling a lot and i was a lil worried it'd be too much, BUT IM GLAD YOU ENJOYED !!! THANK YOU AGAIN SWEETEST MUAH MUAH MUAH

okay I've been binge reading these and I NEED TO TELL YOU, WOW, HOLY SHIT, YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER!!!! Like you capture ur characters so well (and you characterize katsuki perfect 😝❤️) and your writting style is flowing and SOOOO GREAT AND AMAZING!!!!!!!! Like there's never been a time where I'm like 'hm, maybe there should be a comma there' because you have such amazing flow and you write so beautifully. I just needed to let you know that your awesome!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

UUIOAAAGHH tysm !!! i'm so so soooooSOOOSOSO happy you think so and your message was so sweet :((((( i'm on a little break rn, but i hope you can keep enjoying the works i write when im back writing again !!! im also super glad you feel i characterize well this makes me SO HAPPY!! i always like when ppl say this especially when its katsuki bc he's my favorite character in any animanga!!(..if that wasnt obvious LMFAO)

thank you SOOO much, stay safe and make sure to drink water ! have a nice rest of your day/night !!!

edit cus tumblr tweaked out n posted the unfinished draft smh.

sitting in the bus with your fifteen minute now ex boyfriend was not something you expected to happen when you’d gotten ready for your date this morning.

you’re sitting as far away from his as possible, or at least as far as he’ll let you go. because of course shouto todoroki just couldn’t let you have one moment without flashing you his sweet little puppy eyes and kissable little pouted lips, three seats away from you.

your face is practically smushed against the window, intently keeping your eyes fixed on the green grass turning dark with rain while you try to keep your eyes dry. you wonder if it’s your fault, if you did something.

more people start coming in, trying to find shelter from the rain. the more people come in the louder it gets, they’re so loud, he’s so loud. he isn’t doing anything but staring at you, but it’s so intense it almost sounds loud. you feel it in the beat of your ears and the beat of your heart, you focus on the rain droplets bouncing off the pavement outside to desperately keep from crying.

you know shouto doesn’t have to take the bus, his dad could probably get someone to pick him up, he’d only made it a habit of taking the bus with you so you could spend more time together. you think maybe he shouldn’t have, it’s his fault, he spent more time with you then he should’ve and somehow that brought him to sit you down on a random park bench, grip on your hand still firm as he told you he thinks it’d be better if you didn’t see each other anymore.

as if you could just stop seeing him, fucking idiot. you’re in the same class, have the same friends, you see him in your favorite manga and the website you read your early leaks on that you shared with him, you see him in your notes because he’d write them down for you when you were sick to bring them to your dorm, you see him in your favorite snacks because you make it a habit of having him guess the flavor of the skittles you’re sharing.

seriously, what a moron. who does he think he is, the love of your life ?!

well, you sure thought he was.

you can’t bear it anymore, this feels like actual torture and you could honestly give less of a shit about how dramatic you sounded. this is unbearable, it’s suffocating feeling those deep colored eyes constantly on you, reaching out and begging and pleading for something you cannot and will not give more of to him.

this isn’t your stop, but it’s close. you can walk the rest of the way. screw the rain and screw him.

you quietly apologize to the people you’re pushing past, though they can barely hear you as you try to keep your wobbly voice even. when you pass by a group of people the start hissing and murmuring behind you and you think you weren’t being loud enough until you realize that of course he’d followed you off as soon as you got off. ever uncaring of the people around him except you know that’s not true. you know shouto cares, he’s kind, but you thought he cared about you and he apparently didn’t, so you trudge forwards with teeth clenched and hands tightened into fists. to desperately keep from crying.

why does he care so much, why did he follow you in the bus and now out of it ? couldn’t he just let you be alone ?? he’s the one who broke it off.

but you’re sure you’re the one who did something, how could he have ? your shouto’s perfect, the sweetest boy in the whole word. teeth clenched tighter and tighter, to keep from crying.

he calls for you, and then again louder over the rain, he won’t let you drown him out. of course he won’t. not when he calls for you again, a cool hand wrapping around your wrist this time. you want to melt despite the chill, but instead you boil ripping your hand out of his grip.

“just go home ! why’d you follow me out here ?!” his eyes are wide and so sad, you’d never raised your voice at him before even during your rare arguments.

“this isn’t your stop..” he tries to reason, voice quietly drifting through the air, the rain hits the pavement and his hair is getting wetter. he’s so handsome, he always is. you want to kiss him and you hate yourself for it.

“yeah, i noticed that too. did that on purpose if you couldn’t tell, which you obviously didn’t.” you’re being mean, you’re spitting everything at him to get him to just fuck off. but of course he won’t, because your shouto is kind. and he reaches out for you again only for you to back away from him.

“i’m sorry.”

“just leave me alone ! why can’t you just leave me alone ?!” you ask him and yourself and anyone who’s listening. you sob when he slowly, ever so softly wraps his arms around you and you push at him and push and push and push him away but he never backs off, he never leaves you alone. not when he’s everywhere. with the smell of his cologne and the softness of his lips on your forehead and the softness of his clothes as he pleads, he’s so sorry he says. but you don’t know why. he’s the one who broke it off right ?

“is it me ?” you whimper, he immediately shushes you but you continue “was it something i did ?”

“no, no it’s not you—it could never be you, love.” his voice is even, or it’s trying to be, you can tell he’s having a hard time with how tightly he’s holding onto you. like you won’t hear him out if he doesn’t keep you close, it’s funny because you’d hear him out even if he was trying to convince you the earth was shaped like a rectangle, hilarious even.

your heart bleeds for him, despite it being his fault your heart is hurting in the first place.

"it's just…better that way" is what he'd managed to spit out. "but listen—look at me." he grabs your cheeks, pulling your face up to look into his unwavering pretty bicolored eyes. he presses the sweetest, gentlest kiss to your lips, you don't think anyone would love you enough to kiss you like this ever again, and the tears keep flowing because you don't think you'd want to be loved like this by anyone other than him. and it makes you press back against him when he kisses you again, and again

" i love you, i do. and it's not you." he reaffirms again, because he knows you're thinking about it

"it isn't you. i love you, angel." he babbles over and over against your lips. "you know i love you, yeah ?" and you want to say you don't, but the shine in his wet eyes tells you everything you already knew, and you kiss him again, and again. his hands, cooling and so invitingly warm still firm against your cheeks.

me rn

OUGH THIS IS SO CUTE !!!

i have two main oc x canon ships w my oc ryoko (the one on my banner) x katsuki ! he’s a real simple dude (n hes shy asl )so he sticks w babe, baby or sweets/ sweetheart n angel if he’s feeling nice for a change lmfao💀 usually its either the first too or occasionally idiot or dummy cus is it rlly katsuki if he isn’t bein asshat ?

ryoko is a sweet lil girl so she goes for love, sweetheart, lovely, handsome, baby n anythin that will fluster her man (which is literally everything😭😭😭) she’ll hit him with a hon occasionally and watch him go full body red LMFAO

they have childhood nicknames for each other too, so katsuki’s are ryo which he uses if hes bein real sweet, and glowworm which relates to her quirk ! ryoko’s are katsu or suki n she still uses them regularly, she uses kacchan rarely only to mess with him since that’s “izu’s thing”

my second pairing is himari (who i haven’t shown anywhere yet woopsies) n shouto ! shouto’s also a sweetie so we had to go for the classic love, angel is a must and he uses sweetheart some times but (my) love is his go to with mari being his second used one cus she prefers people referring to her by her nickname

mari’s a shy lil baby on the low so she mostly uses sho or todo, todo less frequently now that they started dating and he insists they use each others first names more often lololol she uses baby often and throws a handsome in there a lot too ! she likes calling him pretty boy or hon too but a lil less !

i’m tagging ! @kovu-bunnbunn @andysdrafts @katsus-mistress @katsuisbaby

I'm curious to all my fellow MHA writers. What do you or your oc's call your lovers or nickname? What do they call your OC's?

Mary's(my villain oc) nickname for Kai: My mate, my dearest, my devil, my birdy

Kai's nickname for Mary: His angel, his goddess and light, his vixen and naughty huntress, his little wife

Mary's nicknames for Dabi: Pyro, Dark Knight, Casanova

Dabi's nicknames for Mary: Yakuza Princess, his beauty, firebrand

Let me know what you think of my name choices? I know Dabi's has a lot of work. lol

Plus, I know I've talked about my villain fanfic and figured I would share a bit of a sneak peak here and there. Kai would probably use, "angel" the most and as for Dabi it would probably be "princess."

The way I looked at it while thinking of these nicknames was both Overhaul and Dabi think of themselves as no longer human since they gave up their names to become villains.

Overhaul becomes "A demon with no heart," as Pops calls him.

Dabi falls farther into the darkness and becoming a beast or monster.

Mary being a wolf shifter has her own inner beast. If she loses control in a fit of bloodlust or anger, she could hurt someone.

With Kai, it starts with an arranged marriage between both yakuza clans into love as the pair feels the pull of a "mated pair," between a human and a wolf.

Kai's known since he's reunited with her that she's his, he can't explain it, theirs this undeniable pull he feels towards her, the only woman for him.

With Dabi, he accepts her dark side, gives his support no matter if she kills her targets, random who offended her clan's honor, or under the haze of blood lust; he accepts it all without judgement.

He see's the fire burning within her and beast wanting to be free from it's golden cage. Even covered in the blood of her enemies, he can still see the innocence and kindness in her mismatched eyes. Dabi's a greedy bastard and he wants his princess for himself, he doesn't care if she's married or not.

It's the push and pull, darkness and light, carnal and feral desires, beauty and the beasts, human and inhuman, sanity and insanity; in laws of the underworld, villain don't get happy endings, or do they?

Hi hello i really like your story and i was hoping if i could get some tips for my writings?

Its for my first story.a very dark one.

Okay i will say that i pay too much attention on the movements of characters..i can't write feelings or thought and when i re read it..i just get bored..

My writing doesn't look like the author isn't telling a story.

I need tips on how to lessen the details on movements and more details on feelings, thoughts.

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hii ! so sorry for such a late response </3

unfortunately, i dont rlly know if i can help you much with that :(( i'm the complete opposite of you. 1: i'm a massive baby, and as you can tell from basically all of my fics, they're all super fluffy..maybe try looking for inspo in darker blogs ? getting bored re-reading also happens to me a lot, but it's mostly bc i re read ALOT to make sure everything looks right, so it gets tiring lolol im preetty sure thats normal (or atleast more common than you think)

im also really focused on dialogue, what i like to do is mostly just think about what i want the chara's to say first, and try to frame te actions and descriptions around them n if that helps a lil !

im sorry i couldn't be much help, but i wish u lots of luck on your writing journey ! much luvv <3