Encouragment For Writers That I Know Seemsdiscouraging At First But I Promise Its Motivational-

Encouragment for writers that I know seems discouraging at first but I promise it’s motivational-

• Those emotional scenes you’ve planned will never be as good on page as they are in your head. To YOU. Your audience, however, is eating it up. Just because you can’t articulate the emotion of a scene to your satisfaction doesn’t mean it’s not impacting the reader. 

• Sometimes a sentence, a paragraph, or even a whole scene will not be salvagable. Either it wasn’t necessary to the story to begin with, or you can put it to the side and re-write it later, but for now it’s gotta go. It doesn’t make you a bad writer to have to trim, it makes you a good writer to know to trim.

• There are several stories just like yours. And that’s okay, there’s no story in existence of completely original concepts. What makes your story “original” is that it’s yours. No one else can write your story the way you can.

• You have writing weaknesses. Everyone does. But don’t accept your writing weaknesses as unchanging facts about yourself. Don’t be content with being crap at description, dialogue, world building, etc. Writers that are comfortable being crap at things won’t improve, and that’s not you. It’s going to burn, but work that muscle. I promise you’ll like the outcome.

How do you think the various Cú who know how to use runes (I know Caster, Lancer and Alter know how but I'm unsure about Proto Cú)would feel about having to hide their master who's been shrunk, in their mouth because they had to have their hands free and keep master out of harms way in combat and had no other options at the time, providing that they already had necessary precautions in place just in case it was ever absolutely necessary to do so, also one set in place just in case they accidentally swallowed so master would still be safe even if they happened to end up in their servants' stomach? And how they would feel knowing said precautions were asked for by their alright but also overly cautious Master in the first place? ( if runes magic can give someone the genitals of the opposite sex (source his scary teacher, Scathach, during an event in fgo) who's to say they couldn't be used for this purpose)

Warnings: Vore, Soft Core Vore, Swallowing Reader Whole, Throwing Up, Puke, Being Trapped in a Stomach/Throat, Graphic Depictions of Mouths

Lancer:

Lancer isn’t super excited about your hiding place, mostly because it’s hard to focus with you in his mouth. He tries to be extra careful because of his teeth (he doesn’t want to cut you) and as long as you don’t move too much he can deal with it. It’s harder for him to focus than some of the others because he likes to shit talk while he fights and now he can’t. It makes things go faster honestly, just don’t tell him that.

He may swallow you on accident, getting distracted by something and moving his throat without thinking. You’re not going to make it into his stomach though; Cu has excellent reflexes and is able to catch you in his throat before you go all the way down. It’s like you’re being squeezed by a wet towel and it’s not fun at all.

He finishes the fight quickly and gently pries you out of his mouth, snickering at the dazed look on your face. He’s unapologetic that you almost got swallowed, letting you recover a bit before moving on. You were completely safe with him! He’ll let you lecture him a little if you’re feeling really stressed about it but will move on quickly. Cu knew that the ruins you had would protect you, even if he never talked about them out loud.

Caster:

He notices that minute you set the runes up for yourself. He raises an eyebrow and teases you a little, wondering what you’re worried about happening. If you talk about your fear of being eaten, he’ll be a little confused but ultimately get it. Ok so you’re tiny and you’re worried about stuff, he can get behind that. And if he boosts your runes to make them better, he won’t say anything.

He can feel you saying ‘I told you so’ after he gently puts you into his mouth. It’s not as smooth of a transition as he would have wanted considering it’s the middle of battle but he makes it work. Cu tires his best to hold you still with his tongue, keeping you pinned down and unable to move. It’s safer for you and him.

He actually wards his own mouth quickly before placing you inside to help keep anything else from happening. It’s uncomfortable to have the ‘stopper’ in the back of his mouth but he’s able to handle it the entire fight. He does debate about swallowing you to make things a little easier but decides against it. No need to traumatize you more. The fight ends well and you’re unharmed, if a little wet.

Prototype:

Proto is probably the least prepared of all the Cus. He’s only in this situation because he had panicked and shoved you into his mouth. He was afraid of the others blaming him for what happened to you and all he wants to do is get you fixed as quickly as possible.

He’s very good about not swallowing you, hyper aware of very move that he makes. You’re very good about staying still and Proto will only have issues if someone surprises him. One good pat on the back has him swallowing involuntarily and he’s panicking all over again. Cu doesn’t know how he gets out of public but he’s in your room the next time he’s aware of where he is.

There isn’t anything glamourous about the next few minutes. He shoves his fingers down his throat and pukes onto your floor. It’s nasty and effective and he’s pretty sure you’re going to kill him. To see that you’re perfectly fine is a relief to him and he swears that he’ll make it up to you. Later, when you casually mention that you had a mystic code on to protect against you dying by stomach acid, he’s impressed but also concerned. You thought this was going to happen?? He loves you Master but what the fuck.

Alter:

Alter is not happy. Not happy at all. The people who are forcing him to do this are going to die very painful, bloody deaths and its better that you don’t see it. He doesn’t like having you in his mouth, mostly because he’s tempted to bite down and that’s a big no no. He’s growling the entire time so you’re bouncing up and down, not able to just sit still and ride it out.

He’s keener to spit you out than swallow you in all honestly. His teeth are even sharper than Lancer’s and any kind of swallowing will rub you against those. He’ll die before he admits that he also has a horrible gag reflex and there’s no way he’s going to let you find out. Worst case scenario he’s going to spit you out onto another surface, either a shelf or at someone else to catch. This isn’t all on him, you should be able to help a little.

Cu doesn’t notice the ruins and even if he did, he wouldn’t be inclined to say anything. He thinks you’re being paranoid about ending up in a stomach; he’s here to protect you. That would never happen. In general, he doesn’t mind you being extra cautious, even if he thinks it’s a waste of time. Alter likes it when you rely on him most of all, not matter the situation. He wants to get you back to normal as quickly as possible because that means you’re in less danger of leaving him.

When Anakin finds out who Luke is he will fight for his guardianship against all the Jedi with all his strength, Plo would be his father's competitor

in fics where luke gets plopped into the prequels i want every jedi within ten metres of him to think hes the weirdest jedi theyve ever seen. he has negative lightsaber form. he doesnt know what a kata is. he handstands when he meditates. his solution to sith is to try and have a chat. hes a political radical who keeps suggesting revolution. you ask him what the jedi code is and he says "kindness and compassion and helping those in need :) ". you ask how he used the force like that and he says some shit about how you are a luminous being limited only by your mind. the councils authority is just a suggestion. he is somehow the new favourite of both qui gon and yoda

I LOST MY SHIT OVER THIS. DARTH VADER WHOM THEY HAVE BEEN TRYING TO EVADE/FIGHT BACK AGAINST FOR A WHOLE LOT OF PAGES NOW WHO IS TERRIFYING AND WHO LITERALLY LIGHTSABERED A GUY IN HALF AND LEFT THE PIECES SMOKING ON THE GROUND WHO TOOK LIKE TWENTY BLASTER SHOTS TO THE HEAD AND BARELY EVEN BLINKED AND BASICALLY KILLED LEIA AND EVEN WHEN HE GETS HIS ARM CUT OFF HE’S STILL COMING HE JUST CASUALLY PICKS UP HIS LIGHTSABER WITH HIS OTHER HAND AND SWITCHES TO THAT ONE INSTEAD, WHAT THE FUCK HE IS A NIGHTMARE COME TO LIFE, WHAT CAN POSSIBLY DEFEAT HIM?? NOT  US, LUKE MUST BE THINKING.  RUN! AND THEN HOW DOES VADER GET DEFEATED?

LITERALLY TRIPS OVER HIS OWN SEVERED ARM AND FALLS DOWN A HOLE WHILE YELLING “NOOOOOO!” LOL, I’M DYING AT ALL OF THIS, I AM LOSING MY SHIT OVER THIS THAT IS THE MOST ANAKIN SKYWALKER THING I HAVE EVER FUCKING SEEN IN MY LIFE

Até que sou uma pessoa forte, reconheço. Mas eu não merecia ter passado pelas situações que me fizeram assim, foi cruel demais. E o que aprendi com tudo isso, foi me trancar cada vez mais. Meu coração agora é uma fortaleza, minha alma uma muralha e a confiança não passa de uma velha conhecida que agora vive distante.

Sarah Lima.

Jedi Padawan Mc

☄ Jedi Padawan Mc, summoned by Barbatos from the future in a very distant galaxy. ☄ MC is a descendant of Lilith as in cannon, but for some reason Barbatos was unable, for a few millennia, to locate MC's lineage so he could later discover its location ☄ MC is Master Mace's padawan, his second padawan, because the force had said he was supposed to be her master after Depa. ☄ Yes, the force exists in this reality, in fact god and the angels would be a version of the Ones, based on the darthomir myth of the father, daughter and son, with god being the "father" and the daughter being the angels and the son the "demon" king who created the others. ☄ Barbatos is the only one who knows that MC is from the future and from a distant galaxy, he asks her not to reveal her origins due to ancient laws ☄ Barb couldn't change time, but without MC, Diavolo's project would go down the drain ☄ Mc is seen as a Gray Jedi by the order ☄ Mc kept her crystal in a hidden bag that stays stuck to her body 24/7, she hid the body of her saber so that mammon doesn't steal it. ☄ Mc is still seen as a human without magic, however later she presents herself to each of her brothers, after the pact ordering secrecy, that she has "psychic" powers ☄ The brothers believe that she was raised within an Order of traditionalist Monks, monks who had no contact with the outside world and that's why Mc didn't know pop culture things from the human world, Levi took it personally when he discovered that mc didn't know what a telephone was.. ☄ Mc is super intelligent and hardworking due to the teachings of the order, she is also very diplomatic ☄ Form VI, Niman is the formation that mc chose to specialize in, sometimes she sparring with Bel, after making the pact with Bel, in the forest near the house of lamentations, using bleeding bamboo swords (a demonic version of a banbu) ☄ Mc has 2 lightsabers and a shoto, gifts from her own strength that she received on a mission after losing the previous one.